¿Dónde vas?

in spanish •  6 years ago 

Yo no tengo casa
solo aire
pájaros en la cabeza
y un nido donde pasar el invierno.

Una cueva de barro y ramas
de hojas secas
disecadas
de la que escapo siempre
vestido de libertad.

Soy lo que añoro
busco mis sueños
tengo cuanto quiero
y mi felicidad nada
en un vaso de figuras derretidas.

Hasta que vuelo contigo
a tus brazos
donde el humo no desaparece
sino que me respira en una nube
y me nacen alas invisibles
con las que seguir errando.

spanish cervantes poesia arte
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      ·  6 years ago 

    Me gusto, un nido en donde pasar el invierno, que lindo poema. saludos

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        ·  6 years ago 

      El alma del hombre es eso definitivamente, un ave con alas inciertas semajente a una pequeña pluma que flota en el aire a merced de la brisa que la sopla... No sabemos a donde vamos y menos de donde venimos porque somos eso que bien describes, almas errantes con destino incierto, nacemos y morimos todos los días para volver a empezar donde quedamos. Hermoso poema y gran reflexión, un abrazo desde Venezuela.

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          ·  6 years ago 

        "Pajaros en la cabeza y un nido donde pasar el invierno" Gracias por tu poema @gargon tiene un aire de naturalidad y honestidad excepcional se lee mucha poesía deshonesta por allí, con mucha pose. Saludos

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            ·  6 years ago 

          se agradecen tus palabras, gracias por leerme Oswaldo!!

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              ·  6 years ago 

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Rock and roll

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                😁

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    Bastante interesante, a medida que lees te envuelves en cada linea y no se puede dejar de leer.

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      Gracias!!!

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        excelente poema, me llevó a épocas de recuerdos...

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          alguna influencia de bukowski por allí?? lo imagino por cierta melancolía unida a sed de cerveza que me provocó.. saludos

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            Muy chévere tu poema, sigue publicando, me gustó tu estilo, saludos.

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