Paralelismos (Poema).

in spanish •  7 years ago 

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Dos lineas tan distanciadas
pero un destino común,
cosas tan inexplicables
como que el cielo es azul.

Ni el ayer ni el presente
logran fundir esta historia,
como un metal tan resistente
que ha perdurado en la memoria.

Pasan los días y los siglos
tan casuales y olvidados,
como una tribuna sin gente
en medio de los enfados.

Aterradora soledad
¿Que deseas en este espacio?
aunque acaricies mi espalda
solo logras mi rechazo.

No entretengas mi destino
con tu arrogancia fatal,
vete directo al horizonte
entre burbujas de cristal.

Aquí ya no haces falta
aunque eme engañes con astucia,
tus trucos y tus encantos
solo crearon angustia.

Sin embargo ya se nota
el desdibujo en tu silueta,
como afilada saeta
dejando las páginas rotas.

No parece un eufemismo
que elegante se ha marchado,
prefiero haberte borrado
en un extraño paralelismo.

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  2. http://www.playbuzz.com/ourield10/midweek-games-bad-for-home-teams

  3. https://pixabay.com/es/blanco-negro-pasaje-soledad-solo-2300578/

  4. https://pixabay.com/es/arquitectura-puente-niebla-misty-1846722/

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    Aquí ya no haces falta
    aunque eme engañes con astucia,
    tus trucos y tus encantos
    solo crearon angustia.

    esa parte me encanto me identifico

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    Gracias!!! Disculpa el error ortográfico en "eme", debo corregirlo, tu post sobre el ambiente en Isla de Plata está excelente!!!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        ¡Muy bella composición de palabras! Saludos.

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          Parece una condena eterna la separación entre ambas líneas de ferrocarril. Me encantó la analogía mi estimado amigo Alex!!
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              excelentes palabras...

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                Una sensible y bella escritura que sumerge a quien te lee en sus líneas, un cordial saludo.

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                    Excelente poema..! Animo
                    Apoya mi blog

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