...Me desvistió como hidalgo...

in spanish •  7 years ago  (edited)

Ve desvistiendo como corteza, la fina epidermis
de mi tronco de resina perlada.
Una por una ve desprendiendo alas de mariposas,
que durmieron el solaz retozo de alborozada aurora…

Será toda una odisea en tus manos de labriego
Ir despojando en lluvia menuda de junio
las briznas de trigo que solo darán pan a tu boca…

Cigarras que cantaron hasta que el nuevo sol con su batuta
destinara el final de la canción…
Amarillas hojas, opalinos tules, que van resguardando
Como invernadero, audaz primavera que agazapada
espera despiertes en fragante mieles y abrazos de hinojos.

En descontada luna creciente, con la última prenda de corteza
que desprendas de mi cuerpo, justo ahí hallarás…
El manantial de mi alma, entre retamas que flotan.
Bordeado de brillantinas…
Un corazón que palpita.
Un corazón como premio por desvestir como hidalgo
con tus manos de labriego…

...Mi fino vestido de seda...

@jeadeg / Carmen Guzmán C.
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      ·  7 years ago 

    Versos metafóricos que incitan el deseo y estimulan la imaginación. Me permito acotarte que se te han pasado 2 tildes o acentos, uno en la palabra Será y otro en hallarás. Te sigo y espero me sigas. @joseph1956

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Muchas gracias por el buen comentario y la acotación, ya fue corregido.Ya te doy seguir.Saludos

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Me gusta la forma en la que introduces cada sensación en tus versos. El poema te quedó super genial, ¡saludos!

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Gracias por tus comentarios dart;disculpa lo tarde de la respuesta!...Saludos también para ti!

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Hermosas palabras posees dotes de gran poeta. :D

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Feliz día Tamy, muchas gracias por comentar! Saludos!

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