RE: No puedo respirar tu aire / Verso Libre

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No puedo respirar tu aire / Verso Libre

in spanish •  7 years ago 

Me parece que te saltaste del plano social al sentimental personal, y eso -a mi juicio- le restó fuerza. La analogía sobre cómo la gente entra y sale de tu vida cual si te la estuvieras fumando, me encantó <3 Keep going.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Gracias por tu critica, lo tomaré en cuenta para futuros versos, muchas gracias por comentar tambien♥

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