Viene la lluvia (Hai-Lira)

in spanish •  7 years ago  (edited)

Viene la lluvia
lágrimas desde el cielo
quienes transportan
consigo, caudales de sensaciones.
Efímera hada absorta
que fluye y se comporta
como caleidoscopio de emociones

Hai-Lira: Es una composición poética creada hacia julio de 2010 por la escritora Karelyn Buenaño, nacida en 1980 en el Estado de Mérida (Venezuela). En esta nueva forma se combinan el haiku y la lira, no sólo en métrica sino también en intención, quedando conformado su estructura métrica y de rima de la siguiente manera: 5,7,5ª,11b, 7ª,7ª,11b. Su rima es consonante aunque cualquier tipo de rima es viable.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    qué poema increíble

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        ·  7 years ago 

      missing the rain, i just loved it

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          ·  7 years ago 

        ¡Excelente! Sigue trayendo arte literaria a nosotros. Un saludo.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          excelente post mi buen amigo, me gusto, saludos

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              ·  7 years ago (edited)

            Que hermoso..tal cual como lo expresas en el poema siento la lluvia.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              This post has received a 0.77 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @joseph1956.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                You got a 2.36% upvote from @allaz courtesy of @joseph1956!

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                  You got a 3.62% upvote from @upmewhale courtesy of @joseph1956!

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                    Sneaky Ninja Attack! You have been defended with a 1.62% vote... I was summoned by @joseph1956! I have done their bidding and now I will vanish...Whoosh

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