Estar distante

in spanish •  6 years ago  (edited)



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Estar distante no significa no estar,
el alma contundente siempre va a estar junto a quien la sorprenda
con entereza y verdad;
Pasión y eternidad,
aun así, tu especial aroma
reclama mi vida
para llenar tu alma
de mi amor ambicioso por ser tuya,
sacudiendo lo indeseado de la soledad que me acompaña cada vez que
pienso
en tu lejanía
y me hago un fantasma en tu vuelo
tratando de llegar a tu ser
convertida en diosa.

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Se puede estar distante pero con la mente y el corazón unido a las personas a quienes amamos.

Muy acertadas tus palabras @rose77

Excelente post, bello poema

Gracias @daysissuleima, me alegra que te gustara

La distancia no es impedimento de nada, solo debemos desearlo de corazón. Buen Post

Gracias @luisda7c, la distancia no te impide nada somos nosotros quienes nos impedimos las cosas

Distante mas no ausente, solo lejanos el uno del otro y con solo un aroma llegas hasta aquel lugar donde lo puedes encontrar. Abrazos amiga.

Gracias nena

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

Me identifico con tu escrito una distancia que martilla, que te hace volar pero a veces bajar el vuelo, deseando que las distancias se acorten, fuerte abrazo.

Gracias amor, la distancia crea expectativas

la distancia solo es un numero y tocar el alma no requiere de los dedos.

Cierto, la distancia hace que el encuentro sea mas deseado

Hermoso escrito de forma directa

Gracias @luna04 por leerlo

Hermoso poema.

Gracias @gorayii por leerlo

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