Queridos Steemians les comparto este escrito de mi autoría, quisiera que me contaran qué les parece ¿qué emociones les evoca? ¿cómo creen que es la persona que lo protagoniza?
brotando, mientras caían
las gotas sobre su pecho,
frías
Vi su vida vagabunda
avergonzando su carne
manchándole las dos manos,
sangre
Vi corriendo, torrenciales
desocupando sus venas
aligerando su peso,
penas
Vi su vida recogerse
junto de su cuerpo inerte
saliéndole por la boca,
muerte.
Q buen poema, yo pienso q lo protagoniza el q ve a alguien morir y sufre su muerte, es duro.
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Gracias @betamusic, sí fue una imagen contundente la que me llevó a escribirlo
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Excelente. Muy bonito ritmo has logrado con esas rimas.
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@elguille gracias! Salió muy natural ese ritmo. Saludos!
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