RE: Tarnished Silverlake, CA

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Tarnished Silverlake, CA

in steem •  8 years ago 

Good, but I think that You should rework formatting.

Paragraphs are needed. More line breaks too. Illustrate with pics (max 2 or 3).

The story is cool but difficult to read.

I see you posted it 4 times without a lot of success.

Read on google how to write using MARKUP if you don't like the editor.

Just a piece of advice...
Cheers

steem
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      ·  8 years ago 

    Hey thank you. I actually have a an edited version and that is the only one that should be up! Some weird glitch + my mistake = how do I delete the others?

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        ·  8 years ago 

      And I tried to do the proper formatting and it was good on the sites file, then when I posted, it reset it to its own deal...

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