** 100 Days of Poetry Challenge
-----Update [Day 2]----- **
LOVE ON THE TIP OF THE DAGGER
Love stories end up in the tip of the dagger
Cut it down my neck joints
You are my love dagger
You've cut me up Peel
You season to taste the pain of the soul
If all love don't fall asleep
I will not put languishing suffer
Happily there............
love now languish in the wound
you're driving me crazy heart dagger parts
now all has gone in blood flow
at the tip of the dagger ... ....
the pleasure of love feels bland
My blessing nature of love ... ...
Love ... ....
Do not evoke a sense that makes
Grief lara
Love ... ... ... .
do not make his dagger lara grief
Ohh love ... ... ....
now you're gone in the blood wond....
***@SteemitSchool poetry 100 day Challenge **
@wiralhokseumawe say many thanks to @d-pend and SteemitSchool. Hopefully this poem can give a lot of benefits for us all
Note: my love lives betrayed on the way, my very fall asleep and died out in sorrow to despair.
(Thank you for mebaca. Apologize for not writing all clear because I am still a NOVICE)
**Original Poetry of**
Thank you for reading (suggestion)
@wiralhokseumwe by :
**cinta di ujung belati**
Cerita cinta berakhir di ujung belati
Menggeroti sendi-sendi leherku ini
Kau adalah belati cintaku
Kau telah menyayatku sampai terkupas
Kau bumbui rasa meyakitkan jiwa
Andai semua cinta tak terlena
Ku takkan merana menderita
bahagia tiada…………
cinta kini merana dalam luka
kau belati belahan hati membuatku gila
kini semua telah pergi dalam aliran darah
di ujung belati…….
kenikmatan cinta terasa hambar
Mungkin itukah sifat cinta……...
Cinta…….
Jangan membangkitkan rasa yang membuat duka lara
Cinta…….
jangan menjadikan nya belati lara duka
Ohhhh cinta……
kini kau sirna dalam darah luka…….
Catatan :
Cinta yang ku jalani dikhianati di tengah jalan , ku sangat terlena dan pupus dalam kesedihan hingga putus asa.
(Terima kasih telah mebaca. Mohon maaf atas semua penulisan yang gak jelas karena SAYA MASIH PEMULA)
wiralhokseumawe mengucapkan banyak terima kasih kepada @d-pend dan SteemitSchool. Semoga puisi ini bisa memberi banyak manfaat bagi kita semua
**Original Poetry of**
Terimakasih telah membaca (saran)
@wiralhokseumwe by :
"Love at the tip of the dagger", beautiful poem. The soul vibrates. Thanks for sharing. I invite you to read mine. Thank you.
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Thank you for the compliment . I'm just an ordinary writer. I would love to read yours. wait a few minutes I headed there @corderosiete lol
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love and blood, a natural connection and one that is so often present in ancient tragedies. A powerful combination, good to see you writing in its pairing, @wiralhokseumawe, thank you for the share.
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Ha ha ha Your excessive compliment for my starter. But thanks much for the compliment @carmalain7
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For a so called 'novice' this is a strong piece... a powerful metaphor... I say that love is both the most beautiful and painful human experience we can encounter... in it's many different forms and tragic happenings... nice to bring this to attention here in your work.
Good luck with the rest of the contest, don't be a stranger, come say hi.. I'll be sure to keep in touch with your future work too :)
Keep up the great work!
With love
Hart Floe Poet
<3
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Thank you for your support I hope guidance from you to my writing better. I very much accept the suggestions @hartfloe
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Great piece. Love, blood and pain. Three connected things one cannot do without. I love how you related them to each other. Love causes pain then draws blood which elevates the pain all because of love. Loved it.
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Thanks you so much @skodie
I am just an ordinary writer who is learning and needs guidance, best regards for you @skodie
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