The demons inside the box- Original text.

in steemit •  7 years ago  (edited)

In a room that feels at home, the room is empty
There is a box in the corner of the room and I find myself standing next to it.

I know what's inside it, you can not open it, it's locked. More correctly it is sealed with tape.
I don't want to open this box.

I do not want to open it , because I know what's inside.

The first monster peering out of the cracks I know what it is.

It's the first rose I ever saw, with little boots and a colored umbrella.

How glad I was for the first rose.

The box was closed but open in my mind's eye.
There's the first time I've been boycotted by my class

And there is the time that the first love broke my heart.

But it's just a box, it's not part of me, it's on the empty side of the room, but I can always pull out the memories, the ghost that shows me the picture of my grandmother-
I'm sad but also happy.

The moments when I scored in sixth grade and won the championship, all demons.

Today my heart is free

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People are people who think they have what makes people human. Whatever you want it to be in the world inside your mind. You know what you are inside and you do not want to. You do not know Yada but you do not want to do it again. You're the source of everything. The prospect will endure. Because that world is yours. @amiramnoam

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This is an interesting text... sad a little but with a real moral ! Thanks for sharing, we all have to accept who we are and remember the good memories that make us feel better ! Have a good day 😄 Keep posting !

feeling something different by reading your blog....
after all good writting.
resteemed

thanks! I really appreciate it!

thank you sir.....
waiting for your next blog to take another something special.....

@amiramnoam - Cool composition my friend. Speaking about some things that we hide in some corner of our mind - only sometimes to take a look at those painful memories. Our later achievements have turned those memories into just boxes - not part of us. I love the concept and can relate to it.
Upvoted.
Regards,

@vm2904

Life is the name of memories sometimes sweet often sad yet we are complled to live it with intention of living.

Rose is one of the most beautiful thing in the entire universe specifically the Red Rose ♡

At first sight i felt that you are writing for valentines then i feel yes may be it was about Valentines ;-)

Stay blessed, Steem On :-)

Amazing lines. All of us have boxes which we are not ready to open them. Sometimes we don't open them to not see the memories, another time we do not open to not vanish it.

feel good to read the story nice post n memories 😊😊

good post @amiramnoam

Great stoy and good writing.i like your post and upvoted.

It was very good to read the story, I read it with interest, it is very nice writing,
Thanks for sharing dear.

People already know their own problem but they don't to show to others
people already know their capacity but the people want to do showoff
overconfident people always fell down but peoples who are not confident they get success in life
I learned many things from your post your post was really awesome to read Thanks for sharing @amiramnoam.

Nice post i love your lines
Thumbs up !!

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

This is an intriguing content... miserable a little yet with a genuine good ! A debt of gratitude is in order for sharing, we as a whole need to acknowledge our identity and recall the great recollections that improve us feel ! Have a decent day @amiramnoam

we are always a contradiction throughout life, but we are the ones who made us.

I'm about to finish the picture I draw :)

so nice post i feel rest after reading post

Hi bro you post some great blogs
I suggested one of your blogs to @trophytoken

https://steemit.com/life/@amiramnoam/there-is-no-connection-between-wealth-and-happiness-a-true-story

I think this blog deserves more
Thanks for it buddy

Daily Learn some new from your post. Love to read it.

This is so interesting, amazing work, amazing lines... Will watch out for your next post.

your very intelligent is post ,
the picture is very nice, waiting for next post .
resteemed...

Very very strange post.But It has a good moral.I think you are a good writer with cretive thoughts .

a very exciting story, I really like the experience @amiramnoam.

This type of publications I love, very good and intelligent, I love, I hope your next publication. a cordial greeting @amiramnoam

positive one. is a good way to see live. @orlandojrobaina

really interesting writing @amiramnoam excellant thank you for shareing

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Horror story ,,

Old photos are particularly hard for me to look at. Especially my mother. :(

I love #roses a lot as a gift! I love it' beauty and fragrance! Nice post i must say! 😊😊

I love the art. I like the mystery of the box. We all have boxes and it is part of life. Great post!!

the empty space will be crowded with the sound of the pulse. beautiful red roses into a beautiful empty room. but the roses are not always beautiful and fragrant. we want it. Greetings from me.

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Amazing👍💓

I can feel your nostalgia, especialy with these words: 'The moments when I scored in sixth grade and won the championship, all demons.'

Enjoy your painful-happy-fear emotions.

Good write-up.

great essay..
sometimes even unexpectable things provoke great memories and make our hearths beat fast...
our subcounsiousness remembers every details of our bright and important moments - tiny things, smells, feelings, clothes, and when we see it long time after we feel it like a powerful sparkle in the soul!

Powerful last line "Today my heart is free"

If a plane has a black box. man also has a black box. this black box is the room. He manages the room in our inner world. it shows us what you want. gives you what you want. we are in the battle with that devil in every animation. to be defeated in this war which is the majesty. I hope that we will win this war. we manage that room.
@amiramnoam

Wow ! Interesting and motivational !!