RE: My First Novel: Jeremiah Stone and the Quantum Conundrum - First Chapter is ready for Steemit's Consideration

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My First Novel: Jeremiah Stone and the Quantum Conundrum - First Chapter is ready for Steemit's Consideration

in steemit •  9 years ago 

I love the use of personification, especially in the opening bit. Although it ma not be the book for me, it seems it would definitely appeal to people still in high school. My only recommendation- really limit the number of exclamation marks outside of dialogue. Sometimes a stern . Is more dramatic than a !.

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