BUT IF THIS IS LOVE
Tell me
If I should let every broken tear flow
Into an ocean
Would your heart beat for me
Tell me
If I should tattoo your name boldly inside me
With every bloodshed
Would your heart melt this time
Tell me
If my heart should bleed
In every dark cloud for your response
Would you care
But you know I longed for you
In the midst of dark clouds and wild creatures
Yes I weeped until I could grip my eyeballs
With my palm
You said I should let this feelings mature
I waited
You said you were gonna love me someday
I accepted
But I seem like a trash to you
You only gave me one language
TOLERANCE
You said I should stick to that
You said am being insecured
But you didn’t make me feel secured
Yes I complained
But u showed me attitude
I smiled but the smiles were hurtful
I only found myself in a pit of sadness
Left alone with a consoling tear
But I haven’t done anything wrong
I just wished to be loved
But if this is love
I’d rather hide under the garment of a nun
And let my beauty be digged underground
Cause this isn’t love but punishment
I have only dreamed of a selfless storm
That would bring two yearning hearts
Together
I refuse to be tolerated
Because I am a lover
I am unique
And I deserve to be loved appropriately
Ceecee’s poetry (original)
Great poem @stephceecee12 :) I really can relate to every word of that, as I too have found myself just wanting another to love me and adore me as I do them, to not have it in the end. You are better than that and deserve someone who will love and appreciate you, so please notice that and do not let someone who does not appreciate you, bring you to pain. I have done it for far too long and cannot watch another human being with such a great heart go through it!
You are very talented and I love your compassion. It is rare these days. Keep on pursuing your heart's desires and poetry, you never know who may connect. I did ;)
Thank you for sharing this!!! Upvoted and resteemed!
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Yep dear exactly, but the poem wasn't about me. I just wrote trying to connect with the feelings of others you know this things happen everyday. Initially thought i did't do it right but with this i think i actually tried anyways. Thanks for taking your time to go through my poem😇
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Well, in all honestly, I connected to it, so you did a very fine job my friend! Keep up the amazing work @stephceecee12!!!
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Aww thank you sir😇 will sure do my best
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This is a very lovely poem Ceecee, Love is a beautiful thing but when it is not reciprocated, it can bring a lot of pain. keep up the good work :) #yourbiggestfan
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Awww thanks a lot gracefavour (42) for dropping by, seriously i appreciate your kind words
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Wow beautiful poem, love the descriptive-ness :D
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Aww thanks dear
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Great poem! Everybody deserves to be loved in every way they deserve, although many of us don't love themselves enough to begin with.
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Yep exactly
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