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Wow! This was awesome! You should definitely win with this one!

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Thank you very much! I had fun with it :)

This was a good read, abf its 5am , haven't slept all night, been working in my office, lol. Not Garys kind of working all night though.

Cheers, maggie.

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Glad it's not Gary's kind of work! Glad you enjoyed it!

Oh my gosh, that was an interesting one, thank you!

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Upvoted.

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

So cool, once I realised what Beth was doing it was like wait. WTF. Enjoyed the everyday super dressed down in jeans and tshirt approach. Does let me think of Jessica but I only watched 10min of that before I had to stop or break the screen. I like how Beth gained a lot more character very fast.

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

I don't know who Jessica is, but I'm glad you liked the story. I wasn't too sure of it at first, but I finally got it out of my head in some semblance of order!

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

I enjoyed it a lot, order can be overrated... maybe I just say that since you have more structure in your story than I can wish to accomplish. lol

Jessica Jones that cry baby superhero well one of the cry baby superheroes.

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Ahhhh! I actually skimmed back over my story thinking I had forgotten a character I'd named Jessica :) I'm more than a little scattered, especially when it comes to writing!

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

You should win with this story, it's great...

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Thank you!

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

I upvoted your post.

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Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Gary is a piece of s*it lol and she should have kicked him in the balls a couple of time too lol. This was really interesting to read, a splendid job! šŸ’š

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Oooh, you're right, she should have added that!

Glad you enjoyed it.

Beth is so freaking cool and powerful too, of course. I like her character. Though I wanted to sympathize with Gary, I couldn't. I could imagine his satisfied smile after each murder and how he took pleasure in that just gave me chills. Awesome write, @byn! :)

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

Thank you! I like writing about powerful (and sometimes vengeful) women!

We are SO proud to have you as a member of our
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uvoted and resteemed!

ā¤ MWAH!!! ā¤

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Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

So proud to be a part of such an amazing group!

This is really awesome. I don't know why you haven't joined the Speculative Fiction Writers of Steemit community yet. You've got some chops.

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

I didn't know it existed! I'll check it out.

Thoroughly enjoyed the read
I wanted to believe that it wasn't him.... but he is a bit of a dingbat... at least wait a couple of days right?
I hope he stalls calling the police so she can really give it to him first!! haha

Ā  Ā· Ā 6 years agoĀ 

hahaha..this was a great one Byn, a total surprise but so satisfying! Hey if this is a contest then this one better win!