Whaf Matters Most Is You

in steemitdiversify •  7 years ago  (edited)

Unfathomable affection I gave mine all to you,
even in slumber, your cover I perceive,
shall I take reckon what is obvious of you,
I confine the day I heavily sedated with dreams!

I stir my naked consummation of  rage,
but your noble meekness I concede,
I pray in the field of fancies, ever pretentious,
how long shall I howl for forgiveness?
Must I communed with my own folly,
still it came to me viably dull,
surely a dangling query I get.

Of what manner will I came to rest sparingly,
even in lacking an ultimate pouring of gladness I entreated,
I desired of you even if your distant across the room,
I'm crossing a universe of light and darkness loosely,
and the span rarely expand, less I fall for void!

I tarry because I needed too,
it's you I came in a single step to miles,
able to hop in light years but only to be inches away to insanity,
have led to a burning hope of fidelity I desire you more,
I share this one whole piece I know is,
what matters most is you!

Sampaloc, Manila
December 26, 2017

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wow.
thats a great post..
keep it up

thank you

Thanks shagor016!

Love your work so much!!!
Please take just 15 seconds out of your day to return the favor, it'll help me a ton! Thank you!

Thanks justsomekid!

My sentiment exactly! Good morning, kuya!

There there there... Thanks Jerryl!

Exactly sir. Is that mabuhay?

Lol ipol... I don't get it... Mabuhay? Un o!

hmmm in love sir @iwrite??? I wonder who hmmm thinkthink Lol

It is obviously a great writing and great contributor in arousing love to the passionate lovers

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I am really not good in poetry, you are good as this are good as this @iwrite hehe is this a romantic poetry?

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great as always! thanks sir