Dear All,
"Why don't you write a poem that I can understand?" asked a dear friend of mine.
This poem is my 55th submission.
Thank you.
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL SAD ENDING LOVE STORY EVER
by Ikhwanul Halim
was only 16 at the time
as she walked to the beach
she stole all the looks
finally revealed her true identity
his hands used to shake
whenever he would look at
her beauty still doesn’t fade
everyday life of living with her
because of the different backgrounds
her family didn’t approve the relationship
even couldn’t break them apart
remained sweetheart until eternity
they never married
“I’m the one that was so scared”
years later, he admitted
Banda Aceh, May 1, 2018
This is my 55th submission for 100 Day Poetry Challenge conceived by Daniel Pendergraft @d-pend. I am in Category I.
If you want to participate, please do not hesitate to join Steemit School discord.
Big thank @d-pend for giving me this chance to participate in this event.
Puisi yang bagus, @ayahkasih
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Makasih, sayang 😊
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Abang di Banda Aceh sekarang?
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Iya, bang. Ada urusan keluarga.
Abang di mana?
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puisi yang indah..(beautiful poem...)
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Teurimong geunaseh, @zulacut 😊
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sama - sama cut bang..
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ya udah.. aku ikutkan dalam kontes PIF, nanti kalau mau ikutan kontes jangan tulis tentang aku sama sekali ya. konsep PIF itu ngga boleh bayar kebaikan kepada orang yang sama tetapi kepada orang lain lagi. puisi ini yang paling mudah kupahami dari sekian puisimu yang sudah kubaca.. hahahaha (teuteup tragic ending dah!)
And here's the link to my post. I am featuring you in the contest.baca aja
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Ikot kontes ini aja udah pening palak aku, @cicisaja. Ndak sanggop lagi ikot kontes yang laen-laen...hahaha.
Teurimong geunaseh, beh 😊
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Oohh ndak usah kuatir... Yg ikut kontes aku, kontes itu isinya mengajukan Blogger lain, dgn menyertakan satu tulisan terakhirnya. Kebetulan aja ini barangkali tulisan abang niy untuk kontes lain. Kalo nggak mau ikut pun gpp. Gak wajib hay, kontesnya asyik kok, nggak menang pun masih dapat vote berisi. Yg dapat siapa? Kawan yg kita ulas lah... Judulnya aja meneruskan kebaikan bukan memenangkan kontes. Hihihi. Bersenang2 lah.. Jgn dipikirin kali.
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Now that is truly sad. Emotion can be so intense at 16.
Reminds me of an old T.V. show called James At 16... Lance Kerwin was a heart throb back then
I was sent by @cicisaja to spread the #payitforward love
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Thank you, @headchange 😊
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@cicisaja has featured you in the Pay It Forward contest .
55th submission . I hope that you don't stop . Nice poem that everyone can relate too
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Thank you, @wolfhart. I'll try to do my best 😊
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That was a very nice poem, @cicisaja featured you in her "Pay it Forward" Contest entry, I am glad she did.
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Thank you, @bashadow 😊
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Such a sweet sentiment in your poem!
I found your post from @cicisaja's Pay it Forward Contest entry ;)
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Thank you, @lynncoyle1 😊
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You are welcome...you deserved it!
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