RE: Her - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #9

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Her - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #9

in steemitschoolpoetry •  7 years ago 

This is really well done @theverve. You managed, with simple language, to convey quite accurately the feeling of man under the spell of the woman he adores. (At least, it matches my experience as a male!)

Thanks for prefacing it as you did. Really commendable job writing from a perspective outside yourself! I also enjoyed the indentations of lines, it gave it an interesting and pleasing shape.

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Thank you. I wasn't quite sure I nailed it but I feel much better about it now.