The Heart That Breaks is the Heart That Knows, poetry by @naquoya.
Day 11 of 100 for @d-pend's Poetry Challenge
The Heart That Breaks is the Heart That Knows
There is a vulnerability that lies at the heart of us all.
At the central point of knowing where one's life is in balance,
where one's hopes and dreams lay stored.
Sometimes packed away for safe keeping, and sometimes unpacked and let loose,
allowed to roam free through highways and byways and narrowing lanes.
Into crevices and cracks where even light fears to dwell.
Into empty vessels and overturned longings, our vulnerabilities left exposed.
Our heart lies open, awaiting that knock, watching the door.
The heart that has broken is the heart that knows.
It's been hidden in memories, but what's hidden is stored.
Awaiting its time to resurface, to paint its picture anew.
To splash the colours of memories onto canvases laid bare.
And what light will join us here, as the picture emerges and comes into view?
Will light help us see, or will we break once again?
Trodden on by remembrances of a scarred victory.
A broken heart knows, so much so it won't tell.
A dream will confuse us, or beguile us with its views.
A chanced happenstance, not understood for its unknown import.
A moment of glee – synchronicity dripping into view.
This came from somewhere to remind us once more.
The heart has stood here many times before.
And where a groove of remembrance is laid down with each break,
it remembers each upswing,
as well as each long suffered day.
It knows that its been here, and it knows what's in store.
To be vulnerable is to be open, and with it comes more.
But does one lock up the shutters, the windows, the door?
The heart that's been broken knows that won't stop it being broken yet again.
This is not about love, hope, or fleeting joy.
This is something so much deeper.
To know pain is to remember once again that one is human,
and to be human is to feel for,
to seek out,
to expose oneself to the unencumbered soul.
But what else would you do, stop?
To stop is to die.
And the heart that dies knows nothing of pain,
of life,
of being human in every way.
It is the heart that has broken that knows what it knows.
It knows it is vulnerable and will always be so.
For how else can one truly live?
Reading Notes: This poetry is new and written exclusively for the 100 Day Poetry Challenge, which is explained in more detail here and here.
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Yes, the wisdom of a broken heart... nothing like it. Thank you, for sharing this piece in praise of vulnerability—I agree that it’s better to live like an open wound than a hardened scab...
The one line (of reasoning) I keep returning to, and questioning is: crevives and cracks where light fears to dwell
Is there such a place & must we clean out our wounds before we let the light in (or does the light do that for us)?
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I suppose that line refers to our ability to get the light to shine there, more than the light itself. Not completely sure myself, but this is how the words flowed and resonated. It fears to dwell = we fear to look. Once we start looking, observing, light follows. This is most likely the meaning that was wanting to be expressed.
Thanks for your comment, and having me look more deeply at my own words :)
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There is a purity of rock bottom. I like to think that as we experience "ultimate bottoms" as life progresses, the purity starts to leak through.
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I think you are right. When you have your back against the wall, sometimes something feels like it is clicking into place. Left with no other option maybe that's what it takes. Who knows?
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That is lovely, @naquoya. The heart really does experience a lot of pain and trauma. I like how you close the poem with the message that a heart that is closed to pain is dead, and to live we must be vulnerable.
I thought it was interesting that you only had a set of rhymin lines in the fourth stanza. I haven’t seen that before! I hope you are enjoying the poetry challenge. That sounds rigorous!
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Thanks @jayna, the feedback means a lot. Yes this is one that has been sitting there for a while as I debated whether to post it or not. I liked it, just wasn't sure when to let it loose, so to speak. It was written very free style, just as the energy came out of me, and that is the end result really, with some minor editing. The few lines you mention that rhyme were probably the only ones I got caught up on, as they were different in that sense to the rest. But I felt it worked, to change the flow a bit at that point, and bring it home to that final statement.
As for the 100 days challenge, all I can say is so far so good. I have about a weeks worth in front of me, so a bit of a buffer, but no real idea as to how I will fare over the length of it. Just taking it one poem at a time :)
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Good luck! I hope you’re able to keep it up. But it sounds like you have a very healthy approach to the challenge and aren’t feeling too much pressure. 😊
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A field mouse warms in the sun
knowing that snakes are nearby.
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The dichotomy of the mind or the heart. The forgetfulness of love opens new doors. A wounded heart is wise, it gives the opportunity to love again. Greetings.
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Thank you, yes this is the gist of what I was getting at here.
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Wonderful post
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Thank you.
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nice poetry...
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Thank you.
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