Day 29 of 100 - TO SEE WHAT YOU SEE

in steemitschoolpoetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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They put a spell on you
When they chose your name
Instead of listening to what you had to say

INSANE
Then they set you off to school
Where they brake your brain
They make you choose your place in world
Where you have never been

WAKE UP
Don't believe the things you've never seen
You have the power within to make anything real

IMAGINE AND DREAM
Life is more than it seems
Don't ever let them divide you into more than one teams
Just by helping each other we can know what it means
For love to be free

TO SEE WHAT YOU SEE

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Every day a poem comes out in a different way. I guess it's something about what I have to say.

Peace, my friend! Have a beautiful day!

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Don't ever let them divide you into more than one teams

I'm not sure if you meant to make the word 'teams' plural.

I really like how you use the bold all caps to create a mesmeric influence in the poem.

I thought about that as we are all one team but the system is trying to divide us into many. So I kind of played with those words.
It sure made an impact because otherwise we wouldn't have this discussion right now.

Thanks for your comment. Have wonderful ideas come to you now how to give out your love out to the world!

Peace, love, gratitude!

This is great, I love when we use our creativity to spread much needed awareness. Well done @spellmaker I like this poem alot x

It's heartwarming to get such feedback! Thank you! A lot!

Beautiful piece of poetry @spellmaker

Thank you and have a lovely day!

Simple, yet inspiring! Thanks for sharing your words. :)

nice captur