100 Days of Poetry / Day 70 - Something else / Nešto drugo - Original poetry

in steemitschoolpoetry •  7 years ago 

- Something else -

It is not in the madness
of the situation,
it is not in the calm
before the storm.
It's in something else.

It is not in your behavior
that led to this moment,
it is not in anyone's dreams
where you need to fall asleep.
It's in something else.

It is not in the words
that will save you from hell,
it is not in the deeds
that will bring you in heaven.
It's in something else.

What do you think
this something else is,
what do you think
the ill mind can comprehend?
Can you?





- Nešto drugo -

Nije to od ludila
neke situacije,
nije to u miru
prije oluje.
To je u nečem drugom.

Nije do vašeg ponašanja
koje je dovelo do ovog trenutka,
nije u ničijim snovima
gdje trebate zaspati.
To je u nečem drugom.

Nije u riječima
koji će vas spasiti od pakla,
nije u djelima
koji će vas dovesti u raj.
To je u nečem drugom.

Što misliš
što je ovo nešto drugo,
što misliš što
bolestan um može shvatiti?
Možeš li?




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      ·  7 years ago 

    još malo još malo

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      ·  7 years ago 

    haha muči nemoj nikome reč haha ;)

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        ·  7 years ago 

      nikad bliže 100tom :D

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        ·  7 years ago 

      ej kako ću uzet predah kad stane ovo... kako mi tribaaaa eeej, lagano san izgoria al jbg sta me ne ubije, zajebaje me :D haha

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          ·  7 years ago 

        popit pivu i pocet novi 100 days challenge :D

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          ·  7 years ago 

        nemoj to ni spominjat čoviče. prvo pivu ne pijen, drugo ne pocinjen vise ovo hahaha :D mozda za koju godinu :P

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Wonderfull

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Thanks

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Mila majko! Zar još 30 dana!?
              Čestitke.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                da još 30 :O A ako san uspia 70 zaredom, triban i ovih zadnjih 30. nekidan san skoro zaboravia pa san pisa poeziju doslovno u po ure xD uglavnom, nedam se :D :D

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