Hi,

Congratulations on completing your game! That's super exciting!

I do have some issues with the post, however.

On the formatting side, I wish you'd used our template for the Blog category. It would have reminded you to include a repository link, which is a required part of any post in the category. You would also have sub-headers, and links to the previous posts in the series.

We also like to see significantly more detail in a post such as this. While it is obviously not the first post about the project, this is the big reveal. I would have liked more screenshots, more information, more of the thought process behind the game.

I do want to highlight the generally good grammar and style of the post. Many sentences could have been shorter, but generally the post is quite readable. Not perfect, though. One example of an issue would be "There’s also many systems that interact together." That would have been as "There are many systems that interact together."

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