RE: Steem Monsters Origins Story: Talia

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Steem Monsters Origins Story: Talia

in steemmonsters •  7 years ago 

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

Pure in essence with a touch of it's own spirit and he breathed life into it.
It should be its own instead of it's own.

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nice story i like it keep it up very motivated