原创歌曲MUSIC《你我》| 还是熟悉的味道，让我们把爱传递下去

in steempress •  6 years ago  (edited)

晚上好各位steemit的伙伴们，时隔一个星期，我的一首原创歌曲又出来，这次的创作风格更偏向于积极。相对于以往的歌曲，我都是以感伤和爱情有关的歌曲为主，但是呢今天写歌的时候觉得伤感的元素差不多应该停止了，毕竟负能量不适合steemit嘛！

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今天在写歌的时候用时挺短的，很多时候其实歌挺好写的，无论是作词还是作曲。一首歌分为主歌部分和副歌部分，其实我相对于其他的原创歌手，我自己的不足之处在于，我自己对于主歌部分和副歌部分的衔接掌握的很是不到位。每次到写主歌部分时，我觉得衔接不上去，即使写出来了也会有一种很别扭的个感觉，我很不喜欢这种感觉，这也是限制我前进的枷锁，我为了摆脱枷锁只能不断写歌，不断学习，我自己才能走的更远。

那么今天写的歌叫做《你我》，这不是一首和爱情有关的歌曲，这里的爱是人与人之间友善的爱，这种爱才是人与人之间应该有的，应该长期留存下去的爱，希望大家把这份传递出去，让大家都有爱。

《你我》

愿陪着你，看那“浪漫”日出
留下记录，会有难忘的满足

这是我们，时间交逐的成熟
放下包袱，心情自然舒服

我们的世界有你
从陆续追逐到驻足

我更想懂你
天天对你守护
光阴恍惚
不曾糊涂

愿陪着你，看那“浪漫”日出
留下记录，会有难忘的满足

这是我们，时间交逐的成熟
放下包袱，心情自然舒服

我们的世界有你
从陆续追逐到驻足

我更想懂你
天天对你守护
光阴恍惚
不曾糊涂

我们的世界有你
从陆续追逐到驻足

我更想懂你
天天对你守护
光阴恍惚
不曾糊涂

以上这首我的原创歌曲是一首比较欢快的歌曲，我觉得我自己得改变一下了，总是那么伤感也不好啊，时不时来一首欢快积极的歌曲也是很不错的。希望大家会喜欢我的原创歌曲《你我》，也让我们把爱传递下去。

为了咱们【CN区】的发展，为了你自身的发展，特别推荐以下活动：

1.@rivalhw的月旦评活动““月旦评”第十二期(周年版)正式开始”
2.@abcallen的美食比赛“CN区美食大赛”
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希望大家踊跃参加以上活动！


@abcallen

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      ·  6 years ago 

    才子，失敬🍻

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        ·  6 years ago 

      哪里哪里，握爪子

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          ·  6 years ago 

        阿兰，把喉音丢掉

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            ·  6 years ago 

          那个我丢不掉，那个是天生的，我的嗓音就这样，你应该说我把鼻音丢了

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              去参加歌唱大赛吧😄

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                  ·  6 years ago (edited)

                歌唱大赛，steemit的吗，我参加了一部分歌唱比赛，但是呢那些都太假了

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                  很棒，去上电视比赛，顺便推广下steemit哈哈

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                    哈哈哈，以后看情况吧，对比比赛这种事慢慢来

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