RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 3: Request for the Last Part of the Story

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ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 3: Request for the Last Part of the Story

in steemshorts •  7 years ago  (edited)

My Entry

Sandra made the househelp leave the cooking for her that night. The househelp became suspicious and peeped through the window to see what Sandra was upto. The househelp saw Sandra add a substance to the Kenny's food.The househelp thought Sandra was trying to poison Kenny's food.

The househelp decided to wake Lynda up but She was fast asleep after taking her medication and she remembered Kenny gave her a warning never to disturb Lynda no matter the reason. The househelp decided to confront Sandra as she never even liked Sandra in the first place.

The househelp walked up to Sandra in the kitchen and threatened to expose her act to Kenny. Just as the confrontation began, there was the sound of Kenny's car horn by the gate. The househelp hurriedly turned back to tell Kenny wat she had seen, Sandra hit her on the head with a pestle and the househelp passed out.

Sandra hurriedly carried the househelp to boy's quarter behind the house and tied her mouth and hand so she will not scream when she eventually wakes up.

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just wondering how the story will end..just hoping that kenny will lose his appetite and avoid the awaiting death ..nice summary @mikay

Nice one, i trust you win. @mikay

nice piece
Hope it wins this contest.

Best wishes.

Amazing insight into the summary
Nice work

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Your summary is a little too long (238 words). Please reduce it to 200 words or less.

And now that you have reduced the number of words below 200: thank you for your valid summary.

Edited @vcelier.... Thanks

Goodluck

Only God knows what is going to happen next. I can't judge a book by it cover but who cares what Sandra was up to.

Amaizing, wondering how it would end.

Suspense...i hope kenny asks about the housegirl

U gat this 🙌

Nice summary

U must win bro....

Nice one....kip it up

Niece piece man... Thumbs up to you

Nice write up .. I love the way you used words in story.. Wish you all the best.