I can see constructions American English Native readers would see as stilted. It is a romance story to be sure and I could see that. To take the character's quotes and slam them to the margin in italics. . . unconventional too.
RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 4: Request for an Illustration and the Title of the Story
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ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 4: Request for an Illustration and the Title of the Story