Hi thank you for a very interesting question.
There are a couple of English mistakes and if you want I could provide you with a corrected text on Discord.
Let me know if you would be interested.
Also it might be a good idea to select a more specific category as 'science' is very general.
Thanks again.
Thanks for replying. Yeah, i don't know English much as i not native speaker of English and yes i want corrected text on it. It will really helpful for me..
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