The Dawn Of The Blue City.

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I'm Susan. At least that's how my friends often say hello to me. I'm sitting in junior high school class 1, aka class VII. I love writing. Whether it's works of fiction, or scientific kayra. Well, even though none of my writing is published, but my bookcase has been filled with books of my own, which I certainly print and publish myself. From school to bed, I'm just in front of my laptop to type word for word to become a whole novel. "The Dawn of the Blue City" is the title of the novel I am working on this time. I've been doing this for almost a month. However, it has not yet finished.

Today is Sunday. Usually I've locked myself in my room. But specially for today, I want to go out looking for inspiration. "Susan, are you healthy, right?" Mama's question is a bit tickling. "Hahaha ..." I muttered while looking at the funny face of my mama I love it. Oh yes, as information, I only live three, the same mama and our domestic worker, Atun. While Papaku, has died 4 Years ago. After I finished my breakfast, I ran out of the house.

I went to a city park not far from my house. As expected. Park city is very crowded with those who want to exercise, or just a walk. I sat on one of the park bench while looking around with a small notebook and pen in my hand. My gaze focused on a group of young girls who laughed merrily each other. Their laughter stopped when a teenage boy approached. The young man pulled one of the most beautiful of them. "What's the relationship between them?" I murmured silently as I watched them more closely.

My curiosity grew as the two men looked at each other, the others left and left. So I forced my feet to move closer to them. "Why are you coming again?" Was the voice of the girl I heard clearly.
"I'm back to keep my promise, Jen." Tried the man.
"Our promise has already been canceled. So you do not need to fulfill anything. And ... Never come back in my life. "
"But, Jena ... you're the one and only for me. How could I let you go? "

My curiosity grew as the two men looked at each other, the others left and left. So I forced my feet to move closer to them. "Why are you coming again?" Was the voice of the girl I heard clearly.
"I'm back to keep my promise, Jen." Tried the man.
"Our promise has already been canceled. So you do not need to fulfill anything. And ... Never come back in my life. "
"But, Jena ... you're the one and only for me. How could I let you go? "

I began to understand the direction of their conversation. And their conversation is very inspiring to my imagination. I tried more and more closely to observe them.

.........

"Do not ever say it, Andreas. you've hurt me very much. Do you know how long I wait for you? it's more than 7 years. During that time, I kept enduring. And you ... Though you never give news to me. Do you know??? How sick am I? Do you know, gak? !! "The girl said the words in a high tone and began to show her tears falling from her eyelids. The man suddenly became speechless. Not even able to move.

"To know you, it's the greatest happiness of my life. To be with you, it's the biggest dream of my life. To let you go ... "clear water began to look also in the eyelid of the man's eyes. "It's a biggest mistake of my life. But, if left you can paint a sweet smile on your cute face ... I ... I will do. "The man then turns his body and with the gesture of leaving the girl who is still trying to hold her tears.

My attention continued to the girl. Watching the incident, I almost also shed tears. From their gaze, I know, they still love each other. I'm still young. However, since I am a writer, I am quite able to interpret one's heart's content from his eyes. Before what I saw vanished from my memory, I tried to write it down in my little notebook.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Immediately I went to the crowd. "Oh my God ... !!!" I stared at the man lying bloodied with it was Andreas. I noticed my surroundings, but I did not see Jena among them. I tried to get out of the crowd that surrounded Andreas. I'm lucky, Jena is still standing where she is. "Kak Jena ... Kak Jena !!!" I yelled at him. He was surprised to see me, someone he never knew but knew his name. He then looked around to make sure there were no other Jena names around. I waved at her to be more convinced that Jena I meant was her. "Brother ... kak Andreas, he's an accident." I told him when he was standing near me.

He broke through the crowd, followed by me from behind, of course. "Andre ... Andre ..." he cried as he placed his head in his lap. "Jena, please ... trust me ... I ... I ... re ... really ... Love ... you." After Andres said like that, the ambulance siren started to sound loud. The people who surrounded them started to get away, except me. "Andre, please hold on. We'll take you to the hospital. "Said Jena anxiously. "Jena ... If ... I ... Go ... to ... the ..." Speech Andreas stopped, because Jena immediately crossed his index finger over Andreas lips. "You can not talk like that. You'll be fine. "Jena's crying increased.

Seen ambulance officer was ready with his palanquin to transport Andreas to the hospital. He was laid on a stretcher, still holding Jena's hand. I'm sure he was holding a very sick pain, but he did not want to turn his eyes away from Jena. Really love can be ironic. Jena also went up to the ambulance. He also hinted that I ride in the ambulance. "Dik, you do not go to the hospital?" Asked one of the ambulance officers who startled me. 'Uh, ehh .. I, yes. "I said then went inside. That way, we went to the hospital.

"Je 'Jena ..." said Andreas breaking the silence. "Andre, please stop talking."

No ... I ... Can not, Je ... na. if .. I stop ... tal ... king now, may ... be no mo ... re chances to ... tell .. you, that ... my ... heart ... sta ... stays ... with you, e ... even ... Thought ... my body ... was not ... "after the sentence was spoken faltering from his lips, Andreas smiled to see Jena who was still crying. "Andre ... I'm sorry ... Huhuhuhu ..." Jena was still crying while kissing Andreas's bloody hands occasionally. Slowly but surely, Andas's eyes began to close. The grip of his hand also began to slacken. "Andre ... Andre ..." Only that name kept coming out from Jena's lips.

The ambulance car stopped. It means to have arrived at the hospital. The medical officer ran down Andreas from the car and took him inside for treatment. Jena, who had been drained by crying and screaming, could barely keep up with the ward where Andreas lay propelled by the sisters. I kept following him from behind until I arrived at the IGD room.

I tried to get close to Jena who was slumped against the door. "Kak Jena ..." I said very quietly. He looked at me. "Let's sit in a chair. We'll wait for Andreas's brother. "

"Ka ... Who are you? ..." she sobbed.

"I'm Susan, Ka. I'm sorry, I was in the park, I heard Andreak's brother and sister argue. "I bowed my head. Unexpectedly, he was not angry at all. Instead he hugged me tightly. After he felt better, he sat in a chair with me. The spacious hospital room was very empty. Because there is not a word spoken from us both. With an anxious face, Jena occasionally looked at the door of the emergency room.

Two hours later, a Doctor came out from behind the door. Jena immediately caught him "Doctor, Andreas ..." he stopped the doctor by tapping his shoulder. "We have done everything we can" and then the doctor left Jena who stood still as if she did not believe it. The door of the emergency room opened again, this time it came out that some sisters pushed a ward on which lay Andreas covered with a white cloth.

"Andre ... Andre ..." We both followed Andreas's corpse to the morgue. "Andre ... You've left me so long without news ... you just said you were back for me .. But where ??! Where ??! You just ninggalin me for ever ... !!! Andre, wake up ... Open your eyes. !!! I SAID YOUR EYES !!! "to see Jena so hysterical with Andreas's departure, I also cried.

Shortly thereafter, Andreas's family came. They then took Andreas's body to be buried at home. I went home with the driver brought by Andreas family.

Later that night, I reopened the note I had brought to the park. After reading it, I then continued writing my novel by constantly imagining the face of Andreas who tried to express his heart to Jena despite being covered in blood. The heart-wrenching tale, greatly helped me in writing my novel.

A week later, the novel "The Dawn Of The Blue City" finished me.

"The purest love is like a candle that continues to shine even though it burns down, like a dew that keeps refreshing even without color, like a cloud that softens though untouched. True love is not love that must continue hand in hand to bridge the life, but love is able to release the grip for the sake of a life that has been destined without releasing the feeling with him. Sincere love will continue to live in the memories even though the eyes can no longer look at each other "such was the series of pearls I slipped at the end of my novel that I directed for Jena to keep him firm. In order for him to know, Andreas's love is actually still living in their memories.

The dawn of the city of Blue whose contents are mostly memories of Andreas is finally published and sold on the market. The novel that endingnya resembles the love story of Jena and Andreas was sold well. Jena also helped publish my other books that have not been published yet. I'm really happy, not because my novel is sold out, but because my tiny hand can give a smile on Jena's face. I'm sure the smile is what Andreas expects from the world.

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thanks for your appreciation and your hope for me..

This is really cool fiction, but due to the fact that you took 3 lines with aaaaaaaaaaaaa will have you one point deducted over character inflation!
Lol xD Cheers! Upvoted.

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