Within a minute, her world became still, all she hears is her heart beating fast. On returning home, she has tuned to the news channel where she finds her boy friend's name being listed among some prisoners who broke out the previous night. If Nick returns and finds her, she'll loose the happy life that she's manage to find when he was away.
Quickly she packs up to leave not for long her phone began to ring in her bag. That'll be Nick, she taught. She seized to reach for the phone.
She geared up with the little things she could pick, She got her keys and reached for the door.
For a second, she lost her breath, There he was standing before her, she stood speechless as she took a step back as to let him come in and shot the door after him. Why are you packing and not answering your phone, Phil asked. You forgot the shoes we bought for the dinner, so I came back.
Jully has been dating Phil for 4months now and tonight Phil was to propose to Jully as he promised his father to do so on his sixtieth birthday.
Jully has mentioned nothing about Nick to Phil as she vows to never unveil the memories of her dark past.
They stood speechless, staring at one another, when her phone began to ring again. As she stretches out her hand to reach for the bag where she has kept the phone, she woke up with her hand on the alarm clock. It's just a dream she said but when Phil asked her who's Nick ?. She knew this dream has come alive. For Phil has been awake while she mentioned Nick's name in her sleep.
To be Continued...
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I think this is a good start. A few things here and there I would change. I like the end twist where she wakes up from the dream, but now has to confront the issue that she had mentioned Nick's name in her sleep. Bravo! I wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to your next part.
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Thanks @xhodan, you can check out the next episode and let me know what you think about it
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Love is pain and love is also wicked brother.
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nice writing
LIfe is a choice, love is life, family where life begins love never ends. Love every moment. Laugh every day. Live beyond word.
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Well prepared writing. @admiralsp
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Thanks
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Wow... Nice story... Anticipating the next episode
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Thanks
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I love the graphics.
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I Can't take that credit ☺
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Nicely Written
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Thanks
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Cool twist. Interesting read
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Thanks
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Keep on writing! With every word you are closer to goal! :)
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Thanks
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