Hi Steemians. I just recently found out about the contest which was announced by @swissclive. I liked the conditions:
- The history should be less than 300 words.
- Appreciate only your original work (you can not take stories from the Internet)
- The first tag should be "story-300words"
So I decided to take part in it. And I urge all users to evaluate other works of other participants.
Name: Not a real danger
Word Count: 299
Maria continued to run, languidly breathing. From time to time she found the strength to look back. But at the back of almost nothing could make out. She felt the approaching steps right behind her.
Literally a minute ago Maria was returning home through the park and did not expect that something would meet. It was inhuman in size and quickly began to fit. There was no one around and the only option was to flee.
Maria ran without slowing down, but was tired of making herself felt - a sharp pain in her right side. The only thing that was stronger than pain is fear. He, along with heavy steps behind him, gave her motivation not to stop.
In a moment a blinding ray struck his face. But it was not just a ray, it was the light from a lantern that foreshadowed salvation. Maria was sure that Something would not come out after her.
But then the inexplicable happened. The light that Maria saw a few seconds ago began to move away, and then abruptly disappeared. What happened just shocked her at that moment. Maria felt a sharp weakness in her legs and immediately fell to the ground.
-This is the end! - said Maria out loud
But she suddenly remembered her mobile phone and decided to dial 911. But the phone looked unreal and he did not show time, as if she had fallen into unreality.
The steps began to approach quickly, and were right in front of Maria. There was complete darkness ahead, and all she had done was to close her eyes ...
Maria felt like she fell ... Opening her eyes, she saw the ceiling of her room. When she got up, she did not understand anything at once, and later realized that it was a dream!
Thank you for your attention, what do you think of my story?
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Your comment got more upvote than my story.
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Well its a scary dream for a little girl. I feel your mother tongue is not English as I think sometimes you used he or him instead of she or her? Maybe I misunderstood. I think a little more work is needed to make it clearer what is happening. For example, I didn’t understand the paragraph starting “In a moment....”
Thanks for participating.
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you are right, English is not my native language, I translated from Russian.
I will work to make my English better and more understandable
thanks for the support
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The @OriginalWorks bot has determined this post by @danny.green to be original material and upvoted it!
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What a nightmare. You did explain that English isn't your native language, so the errors are excusable. Nice try.
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