A group of tourists crosses the Sahara desert in search of a sphere that, they suppose, has the power to rejuvenate.
They came to an area full of pyramids and according to the maps, it was the place they were looking for so carefully. They had no words to explain the emotion they felt.
They had no idea where to start their search, they went through the pyramids one by one, there were still two pyramids to examine. But they were exhausted, the camp was better and the sun was saying goodbye.
Sitting around the campfire, the group of tourists discussed the hard work and the lack of answers.
Then, out of nowhere, an extraterrestrial being appeared with a kind of knives, his appearance was humanoid.
He quickly addressed a woman in the group and beheaded her horrifyingly. The scattered group watching the scene.
Killing that woman was not enough, it was just fear and the darkness of the desert, everyone had left their flashlights and the predator was behind their traces
. Another woman in the group stumbled over a rock, went directly to the ground and was hit by this strange being. I leave his face totally disfigured.
No more was known of the strange being. After a moment of fear and silence, it begins to shake and two of the pyramids begin to rise rapidly until they disappear.
There were 9 survivors that night, now they go on an adventure alone to the tropical forests.
Nice collection of pictures, but not much of a plot or ending. Clearly you tried hard with the pics but the fiction let you down. Don’t give up. You must spend much more time on revising what you write to make it gripping so we have to read more in order to know what happens next.
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