RE: Hospital Watch

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Hospital Watch

in story-mentor •  7 years ago 

Looking at the replies, I think this story is a bit of a failure.

I was trying to make it clear (in a subtle way) that it was Death that works there (not me).

Sorry.

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Don't be sorry, it was an excellent piece of writing.

I think sometimes, a story needs to be read a couple or three times in order to see all the detail.

I got it too. Nice :)