RE: BILAL- #1.AN INTRODUCTION( Short story series)

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BILAL- #1.AN INTRODUCTION( Short story series)

in story •  7 years ago 

Appreciate your writing skills in this post.... You have written down the story perfectly but only thing which I can't see here in your story is lack of suspense (curiosity) ,, what was your aim of writing..... I appreciate you created your own work.... Keep up the good work

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thank you very much for your honest feedback...will try to work upon your inputs.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Pleasure.... If you get something better with my help it will be a great honour for me... Stay blessed and be healthy part of steemit community...

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