A love story :- one boy and a girl

in story •  7 years ago 

Here I mention a love story as a poem, maybe you'll love

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One girl was passing by..they used to be a mask on her face .....
A boy would die on his heart.
Whenever the girl used to come from the street ... then the boy used to say.
Remove the mask from your face ... and show me the moon face ...
The girl was married a few days later ... the girl did not remove the mask from the face ... did not show her moon face ...
The girl got married ... the boy did not notice for a week ....
The girl started living upset ...

The dying tail reached his house.
Then the house said ...
Mhatotma was too late for you to come ...
That divan died a week ago ...
Only then did the neighbors fulfill their duty ....
The girl transported the boy to the grave ...
The girl started crying loudly ... she began to wash the tomb with her tears ...

Then there was a voice from the grave ... It is a matter of time ...
Yesterday was you in the mask ... I was in Shabab.
Today I am in the mask ....
The girl started asking ... why did you ...
Then the voice came again from the grave ....
Your dolly got up..My body got up ...
Flowers are too rainy ... flowers are me too rainy ....
Just the difference was ...
You got decorated ... and ... I was decorated ...
You also go to the house ... I also go home ...
Just the difference was ...
You got up ... and..I was raised ...
Mehfil was there too ... people were here too ....
Just the difference was ...
They laugh there ... their cry here ...
Kazi was there too ... The cleric was also here ...
Two words have also happened to me ... I have spoken to myself also.
You had a nervousness ... I lost my reputation.
Just the difference was ...
You were adopted ..... I was buried ......

Writer:- @amanpathak

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          ·  7 years ago 

        so sweet love..

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Thnx I like to write about love

          Am a poet

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