RE: A Promise Kept

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A Promise Kept

in story •  8 years ago 

Nice story. Was half-anticipating the part where the rest are punished for their deception...

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HA! It would have been a good idea to have them eaten by a troll or something :)

Asian cultures don't exactly have trolls.. witches / shamans or a fire-breathing dragon would be the thing. Another twist would be to change up the youngest boy to an wise old man. It would then become an allegorical picture of millenials and their #careergoals put in contrast with the older generation...

Wow, you are really good at pulling threads together! I should think more like that when I write.

Thanks for the kind words. I think like that but I don't write :( I feel all the creative essences (art, music, prose) in me have been diluted or suppressed by the daily grind. Life goes on..