donzBagio episode 2 "escape survive"

in story •  7 years ago  (edited)

after our family survived the tragedy and arrived on the island of Java, we immediately headed to the grandmother's house in the city "jember", during my journey was given a stunning scenery, ranging from the people who are there, the culture, and the behavior I just saw a great city, a very busy highway, completely different from what I've seen, all felt in a strange territory.

while watching the sights of the city, I also saw the magnificent view of the city park, actually wanted to stop for a moment to enjoy the park, but father and mother forbid, we must immediately arrive at grandma's house, because the family there is waiting for our arrival.

disappointed with the decision of the parents, then I divert my interest to menicasti scenery course, until we finally arrived at grandma's house.

ini versi indonesianya coy

setelah kami sekeluarga selamat dari tragedi dan tiba di pulau jawa, kami langsung menuju ke rumah nenek yang ada di kota "jember" , selama perjalanan saya diberikan pemandangan yang memukau , mulai dari orang-orang yang berada di sana , budaya , serta tingkah laku yang benar-benar baru saya lihat , kota yang besar , jalan raya yang sangat ramai , benar-benar berbeda dengan apa yang pernah saya lihatv , semua terasa berada di wilayah asing .

sambil menikati pemandangan kota , saya juga melihat pemandangan taman kota yang luar biasa menarik , sebenarnya ingin hati untuk berhenti sejenak menikmati taman tersebut , tapi ayah dan ibu melarang , kami harus segera tiba di rumah nenek , karena keluarga di sana sudah menunggu kedatangan kami.

karena kecewa dengan keputusan dari orang tua , lalu saya mengalihkan minat saya untuk menikasti pemandangan saja, sampai akhirnya kami tiba di rumah nenek

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