In The Dreaming: Chapter Two "A Friend With No Name" (Fantasy Y/A Novel)

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-I wrote the following novel nearly two decades ago. In the years between then and now I've honed my craft, and my perception of this world; my thoughts and ideas; have changed dramatically. However, I still enjoy the premise and have decided to do an overhaul of revisions and rewrites, though likely not until sometime next year. (Though I'm sure I'll do a little as I post chapters)

For now I hope you will enjoy a glimpse into my book writing beginnings...



They are the closest of friends though they have never met in waking life.

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Prologue-PT1 Prologue-PT2 Chapter 1



Chapter Two



“Aliyah, it’s time to get up.”

“Okay mom,” she mumbled, struggling to sit up. Her dream still had a hold on her, the words “What’s your name?” still hanging on her lips though once again she had not asked.

Over the past three, going on four years she had gotten to know him very well, but still no name. How odd, to not have a name for someone she felt was a dear friend. She knew that he lived in a city, that his father had left when he was young, that his mother shared his house but not his life. She knew that he was the smartest person she’d ever known and that she had a huge crush on him. Of course that was ridiculous, having a crush on a figment of imagination. Yet to her he was real, as real as her parents and brother. He was perhaps three or four years older than her, so of course the crush was not mutual, but she felt he cared about her deeply just the same.

He always entered the dream in the same way, coming from the other side of the river. Sometimes he stopped across from her to wave, other times he would sneak around and try and startle her. Last night he did the latter. She relived it behind her eyes as she scribbled it down.


“Hey!” She squealed after he grabbed her shoulders from behind and gave her a heart attack. She should’ve been immune to being startled by now, but he was good at doing it in a random way-nights would go by where he would announce his arrival, than bam, he’d scare her.

“So what were you all lost in thought about?” He asked, plopping down next to her on the comfortable blanked of pine needles.

“I was actually thinking that I should try and make my way over to your side of the stream before you get here and startle you for a change!”

“Ahh, now you probably shouldn’t have told me that because you have lost the element of surprise.”

“Yeah, well,” she grabbed a handful of needles and threw them at him playfully.

“So, have you met any “real” friends yet?”

“You ask me that every time, believe me when I do it will be the first thing that I say to you,” she frowned, “I’m beginning to fear there just isn’t real friendship material out there.”

Collin smiled gently, of course he heartily agreed with that statement but he did not want her to give up hope. “Don’t be silly. It’s just that when you’re looking for a friend of that caliber it takes more time. There are plenty of good people out there I’m sure, but you have to sort through all of the rotten ones to get to them.”

Aliyah grinned, imagining that people were like apples. If that were the case she would be pawing through a pile of squishy over or under ripened fruit looking for the perfect red one. She shook her head, “Why do you say that, you don’t believe that. You don’t think there are people truly worthy of calling “friend.”

“That is not true, I call you a friend.”

“That doesn’t really count. Another example please.”

He considered how he would answer this knowing full well that though he had many people who thought of him as a friend he did not feel the same about any of them. “Well, when Jack gets a little older I know I’ll consider him a friend.”

“He’s your brother!”

“Oh don’t base it on me anyway, I’m different than you. I have much more reason to distrust people. I would have a hard time spotting someone worthy of friendship if they were in my face everyday.”

“Yeah, I guess that’s true. Well, don’t worry, they’re out there, I’m just going to take my time selecting.”

Collin smiled at her fondly. “You do that.” He stood and reached down to help her up. “Come on, let’s go to the clearing.”

**

She looked around them as they walked. It was beautiful. The trees in this particular spot were just far enough apart to let the sun through everywhere, but so high that it was still considerably darker than it was in the clearing they were headed to. They had discovered it about a year after they began to dream of one another. It was almost a perfect circle, the grass in it was full and soft, and at certain times different colored flowers decorated it like exotic jewels. She saw the marked trees, they had scratched a bit of bark off of a line of trees on the way to the clearing so they could easily find it, it should have been strange that the marks remained, but everything about these dreams were strange. Like how sometimes it was daytime in the dream and sometimes night. Come to think of it, it had been night in the dream all of the time the first couple of years, but one day they had wondered what it would look like during the day and voila it began taking turns.

She turned to her dark eyed friend and grinned-“Race ya!” They began to run and the dream broke apart.



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Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. It has a lot of similarities to @dreemsteem's story Fireflies. Check it out https://steemit.com/fantasy/@dreemsteem/fireflies-chapter-1

All ok here, hope to be back soon xx

Hehehheeh yes! @dreemit actually commented on that first chapter when I first came to Steemit :)

We laughed about how we were twins that would have chosen each other's names if the one we had wasn't available!!! Lol

I'm doing the audio book of fireflies now ❤️
And writing the sequel.
I'll have to stay away from this one to make sure I don't get influenced!!!! LOLOL (though I'm pretty sure that we go in different directions with it!!! Well... Not pretty sure, but hopeful that we do! Lolollol)

Good luck and nice resurrection of your story @dreemit!!! I thought you hadn't finished it back then but glad you did! An unfinished book is a sad thing hehehehe

Wait, did you finish that book on here?? I'm so sorry I missed it! I was just answering deb, telling her that I wished you'd continued. And here I am posting the book I mentioned in that comment to you way back when!

Yes mam!!!! 😊 It ended up being 32 chapter plus a cool video epilogue :)

It had some fun interaction with the readers cuz they were either #teamtalia&bryd or #teamderek... And it got HEATED at points. Lol some people were VERY protective of Derek.. (cough cough @bluefinstudios and @enginewitty) hahahaha

Hehehheeh it was a TON of fun. Well.. so much so that we decided to do the audiobook and release that on dtube!!!

@krazypoet and I are collaborating on it and it's pretty sick 😍
He has some skills when it comes to background music!!!

You're more than welcome to come along for the audiobook ride! Hehehehe

We are only on chapter 4, so we're getting some new listeners this second time around and some veterans to the book who want to hear how it sounds live :)

The sequel will be released early next year ... Most likely will end up being a trilogy!

It's ok that you missed it ❤️ The Steemiverse is a big place!!! Hehehe

Sending love 🤗

Hey Derek is like my alter-ego personified by your lovely brain, magically embodied on this here blockchain. Love you Dreemy🤗😍😘😍🤗

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Hehehehe ever the predator Hunter.....

@dreemit is a pretty renowned writer on Steemit!!! Take a peek at her story too!

We had similar ideas (we had similar Lots of things we discovered early on hehehee) the dreem twins 😉
Give her story a gander too!!! ❤️

Awwww, you are such a darling!! How have we been missing each other in here?? I scrolled down to your epilogue so I have all the chapters now, I'll definitely be reading that when I get the chance. And checking out the audiobook, which I'm sure will be pure awesomeness!

I remember that story, in fact...yup I commented on it and referenced this book, I thought so:

I loved it! So well-written and what a great hook at the end ;)
The first book I ever wrote had a slightly similar premise, only it was actual dreams, lucid dreams...and there was also a boy :) I actually have had some lucid dreams, as soon as I realize I'm dreaming I drop what I'm doing, run outside and leap into the air and fly...and what always gets me about it is when I've woken from it I can remember the sensation and it's unlike anything I have ever experienced. Which makes me think I must have done it somehow, somewhere. It's actually what inspired me to write the story. I used to wish I could do it on command but the more I thought about it, the more I realized exactly what you expressed-if I could do it every night it would lose its magic.

Beautiful story, can't wait for more!

I wish she would have continued, I was enjoying it :)

Glad to hear it, miss your presence here!

@dreemsteem's presence has only grown and she's heading up several initiatives like #spunkeemonkee @welcomewagon and is an upstanding member in #thealliance. She's no whale, but a far better content creator and engagement specialist than most of the whales out here. She's one of the people that will see this blockchain survive Destiny. You should pay more attention to her activities.

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Oh, no doubt @dreemsteem's fantastic @enginewitty! She has the kind of positive energy that is contagious, I love her beautiful soul! I wasn't sure how I lost track of her, but going back through her blog...when she started back on steem last year I had recently lost my dad and my attention on steemit wasn't the same for some time. I'm super glad we can reconnect now though, and I do appreciate your- haha- adamant support of her, she deserves it ;-)

Oh my gosh!!!! LOLOLOLOL I just read his comment! I saw the Derek one but I missed that one! Lol

Awwww yes! 😆 That was adamant support!!!!! 😂😂😂😂😂

Well I'm honored that you feel that way @enginewitty!!!

And thank you for your kind words @dreemit!!!

I'm so sorry that your dad had passed away and certainly wouldn't expect my silly book to take center stage over anything like that!

Thanks for even considering going back to read it! That's incredibly thoughtful of you ❤️

I will be uploading chapter 5 tonight! I'll dedicate that one to my Dreem twin 😜

Hehehhehe (still blushing over Witty's adamant support!!! 😂☺️) Very sweet!!! Hehehe

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

LOL!! I read the comment and I was like "I just got TOLD" Hahaha! I love it though, there's nothing better than a fan/friend like that, go you!!

Sweet, I'll be on the lookout for it!!

Oh gosh hehehehehee...

#1 fan right there!!!

Thanks for laughing!!!!! 😂🙈☺️

Oh yeah, I just had my second steemiversary a couple days ago, made some collages, you may see a familiar logo ;-)

She does! She's highly dedicated to her family circles on the chain. Off chain I feel your IRL pains, been rough on the home front here too. Glad you gettin back in action😎

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Ohh, I like you, haha! Nice to meetcha, hopefully we'll get a chance to hang out in the steemiverse, xo!

I'm never far and easily summoned😋

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I missed this!!! You honor me, Sir 🤗

I'm blushing over here! Hehehe ❤️

Loves my Booty Pirate Cap'n😍🤗☠

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  ·  6 years ago (edited)

What are the rules here? Are they dreaming of the same dream every night? There's no change in the setting for the whole three years? I meant, no drastic shifts in landscapes? How can they be so sure that the avatars accurately represent the other in real life? More importantly, is it "Into the Dreaming" or "In the Dreaming?" So many questions!

Yep, the same place, and there is a long reaching reason for it...though when I do the rewrite we shall see. They can't be sure of anything pertaining to the other, not even that one another is real since they always wake up when they try to ask for a name :) The title...I may go with Into the dreaming, that's also up in the air.

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