๐ŸŒณ The Land of Nordania ๐ŸŒ‘ ~ PART 6 ~ [Original Story/Poem]

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when suddenly.

Big round orbs start to appear
Watching me, staring at me
Though they have no eyes
I can feel them, hear them
They are the lost souls
Sreaming in my head

Slowly the fog starts fading off
A black darkness reveals itself
When the big bright light
Starts to move
Heading into my direction
It is Queen L'odair!

"Quiet!"
Prompt, the echoes in my mind are gone
Total silence.
She is right in front of me.
She.. She is... So Beautiful!
Nothing but pure light, in all its colours
Enchanting me

When for a moment, I look down
Realizing my feet have left the ground.
I am floating..

Rapidly I turn my head
-Nothing but an empty void
The entrance I came through
It is Gone..

I look back up, in front of me
Staring at the light, at Queen L'odair
And she starts to speak;

"Idling, why hast thou forsaken me?"


By Droucil


~ Part 1 ~
~ Part 2 ~
~ Part 3 ~
~ Part 4 ~
~ Part 5 ~

~ Part 7 (finale) ~
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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

7 parts is great!

I use 7 words in my seed poems.

:)

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thank you for all your kind words and upvotes :)! Really appreciate it

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย (edited)

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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Jup :)

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

This post has received a 0.45 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @banjo.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

TY @banjo

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Once upon a time, a dog died. The end.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Yes. A total valid point.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

You know the meaning of life?

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Yes. It is to exist and experience.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

What is your favourite movie?

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย (edited)

It is named: Why am I talking to a bot

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

This post has received a 0.67 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @droucil.