🌳 The Land of Nordania 🌑 ~ PART 7 ~ [Original Story/Poem]

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Idling, why hast thou forsaken me?
She spoke.

Totally baffled
I Questionably look at her

Idling, what hat thou wrought?

I... I... I don't understand...

Idling, thou left me

Thou left thyself

Why??

I... I don't understand...

Why hast thou beguile thyself in sorrow?

Why???

I...

Why!!!?

POOF


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In a blink of an eye
My body explodes
Now I understand.

I start crying, screeching loudly
Overtaken by sorrow and despair
What was I doing?
What was I thinking?
What was the meaning...

I could never become...
The divine, its perfection
How could I ever achieve...
This pain, This sadness...

"Why?! Why hast thou forsaken me!?"

By Droucil

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