TOO SIMPLE TO SEE (An Original Poem)

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A Personal Note: I began teaching meditation about eighteen months ago after twenty-two years of practice. I had no teaching experience and was genuinely concerned that I wouldn’t be good enough. Demanche, was one of my first students. Demanche was very eager to learn, progressed quickly, provided good feedback, and missed only two or three sessions.

I didn’t know much about him but he was always the first to arrive to class so we would make small talk. I learned he liked to travel, enjoyed cycling, and was seeking inner peace. As my teaching progressed and my confidence grew I decided to publish a book on meditation. During our last session together I told him he would soon be invited to the book launch party. He seemed surprised and said he’d definitely be there. Just today I learned that Demanche passed away unexpectedly...far too soon, at thirty-four years of age.

Folks, it’s far too easy to get consumed by trivial things in this life. Do me a favor, if you have dreams...don’t put them off, if you’re engaged in petty arguments...forgive, if you’re waiting for the right time to share a talent with the world...throw caution to the wind and just DO IT! We don't have to be prepared for everything, learn as you go. The most important thing is to not waste time. Tomorrow is guaranteed to none of us.

Tonight’s poem is dedicated to Demanche. Rest in peace fellow seeker.


Time is cruel
in that there aren't
enough minutes
in a lifetime
to learn all
there is to know

the best of our
years are spent
stumbling,
sifting through
the bullshit, the fluff,
the liars, and the takers
until one great day
our hearts reveal
to us what it is
that truly matters

even if our eyes
witness the truth
of only one sunset
there would be
immeasurable worth
in all of the struggle and pain

there is
such beauty
in this world,
if only it weren't
too simple to see.

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Very heart-wrenching. May he be at peace. How do you feel about out-of-body & after-death experiences @ercivancewalton? I, myself, meditate. So glad to hear it is one of your passions! I try and keep at the morning 5 positions of Tibet, myself, if you know what I mean (oh and deer exercises). XO <3 Much love to you tonight.

Thank you for the kind sentiments, @robyneggs!

My condolences on the passing of your friend. The poem is beautiful.

Thank you!

Very true! We tend to waste minutes in things that are not so beneficial when we should be spending every minute doing something positive and just enjoying the beauty of life! Thank you!

You're right, @ travelista! This is truly what life is about. Thanks for your comment.

It is heartbreaking to know about your friend. May God comfort you dearly. Life is simply like dust which the wind can blow away at anytime. You have really inspired me with the story. There are many gifts and talents buried somewhere in there that I have always been waiting for the time to be right. I realize that the time can never be right, waiting for the opportunity to come, I might have to wait forever. Hence I shall take the bull by the horns and step into my destiny even if I'll make mistakes, I can always learn as I go along. It will be a crime to have never tried, better die trying than never to have tried at all. Thank you, truly appreciate that.

Thank you for your thoughtful comment!

excellent writing !!!

oh! amazing lines -

 there is
such beauty
in this world,
if only it weren't
too simple to see 

Thank you!

so lovely !

Thanks! 😊

always great poem @ericvancewalton

awesome poem @ericvancewalton

but your poetry is not too simple. it's amazing :D

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

awesome writing :)

lovely ! lovely ! lovely !

Great Poem :)

so nice poem !!!

RIP Demanche! From the stars you were made and to the stars you have returned. Jah bless!

Much appreciated, @greenhatter!

please read my Poem too

nice poem!

Very nice!

Cool man!

nice.

wow ! great poem :)

may you meet with him again somehow outside of time

see that's what I was thinking...he may, in fact, still be around...usually about 72 hours.

RIP Demanche.

Great Poem.

Thank you.

Always loved your work and learning from you. :)

Thanks @mindfreak! I'm glad to hear that.

@ericvancewalton, this is a tribute post to your friend., a poem composed a few hours ago. https://steemit.com/life/@delphia16/now-is-the-time-make-it-count-an-original-poem Thank you for all you do.

I appreciate it, @delphia16! I get a 404 error when I click on the link. It looks like the link isn't working.

Sorry @ericvancewalton, the full stop always causes commotion. You can check the link out now.

lovely - following to read more :)

Too simple to see, indeed. We tend to discount it because it doesn't seem important enough to be profound. What a paradox.

I like it :)

nice poetry :)

love it
so much

👂no evil, 👁 no evil

heart touchy !

your all writing is very enjoyable :D

Yikes I'm sorry.

Thank you, it was definitely a shock.

cooooooooool

Sorry to hear about you friend.

I appreciate it, @azurejasper.

beautiful poem !