I stumbled upon a fellow
as he struggled with his bag,
he seemed an easy target
for a game of verbal tag
He was ordinary, plain,
I knew I wouldn’t be in danger
as I calmly walked up to him and asked,
“Allow me to paint you a picture, stranger?”
“But you have no paint,” he said,
“Please, don’t be absurd!”
“Excuse me my dear fellow,
I paint in ordinary words.”
He replied, “Sir, you have no brushes,
not a canvas here to find.”
“My pen’s the only brush I need,
the canvas is your mind.”
The man, looking a bit perplexed,
reached up to scratch his head
and took me by surprise
with these fourteen words he said,
“Allow me to scribe a poem for you
of crashing waves and soaring birds.”
“Sir, but where is this pen you’ll use
to scribe your page of words?”
A brush came from his pocket,
a canvas from his bag
it seemed an artist beat me
in this round of verbal tag
Feeling squarely beaten
it seemed to me absurd
that an artist out-foxed a poet
at his game of wit and words.
(gifs sourced from Giphy.com)
A little about this poem - Verbal Tag is one of my earliest poems and appeared in my first published collection of poetry entitled, “Continuum” (now out of print.)
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hi, you have interesting thoughts
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just... beautiful!
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Thank you, @aneblueberry.
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Oh the cunningness of the creative mind. We race one another crafting line for line. Whether lines of words or colored lines of brush. A single line of lyrics, or bodies lined to touch. We dance this life in artistic form. Always just outside the mundane of norm. We, who are creative, do enjoy a challenge. Multitalented we are, yet focus one skill as we balance.
Nice poem :)
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Thank you for your poetic response, @verbal-d!
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Thank you for the wonderful poem and inspiration once again. Let the continuum run full circle. :)
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the beginning is a poem, drawing
a line between heaven and earth
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Nice poem
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Thank you!
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I liked very much the poem and the gifs too! Thanks @ericvancewalton !
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Thanks for reading, @cynetyc!
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“My pen’s the only brush I need,
the canvas is your mind.”
I love that part!!!! Seeing the mind as a canvas semms pretty limitless!
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Our minds truly are canvasses with an infinite amount of blank space to fill up.
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There's always someone out there, with a different angle. Someone that knows, just as much, as you... Thanks @ericvancewalton!
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You're welcome! So true, @macksby. Thanks for your support!
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Love it!
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Thanks!
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very good poem congratulations, thanks for sharing
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Thank you!
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I like this poem. Well done!
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I appreciate it, @gregory-f!
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I love your word play Eric! I've tried poetry, but fail miserably! I'll just read yours instead :)
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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the poetry @angierose! It gets easier with practice.
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Wow! I fucking loved that. I felt that wry smile and twinkling eye of a good back and forth. I can't wait to check out more of your work!
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I really like that it sparked such vivid imagery for you, @jmt! Thanks for reading!
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Beautiful. Loved it.
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Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!
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This is very inspiring and creative. Thank you for sharing this, my mind has been sparked.
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I'm glad it inspired you! Thanks!
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@ericvancewalton, always a delight to read your poems, your work are quite inspirational and it help me not to give up here on steemit. Just wrote another poem here @ https://steemit.com/steemit/@delphia16/steemit-an-original-poem . Hope you enjoy it too.
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Thank you, @delphia16! I'm so glad you're enjoying my work. I'll read your poem, thanks for the link!
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Love how this tells a story. It's enticing and whimsical, and the end leaves you satisfied. Awesome work
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