RE: A guest at my motel asked me to post his story. He looked like he went through hell... - Part 1

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A guest at my motel asked me to post his story. He looked like he went through hell... - Part 1

in story •  6 years ago 

I loved the preface and your clean style with short sentences and fast lively dialogues. Well done, its seeable there's a lot of work on characters behind.

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Thanks! I worked on the dialogue for quite a bit, so I'm happy that you enjoyed it!