RE: Short story of the day: Voyeur

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Short story of the day: Voyeur

in story •  6 years ago 

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

Her heart was beating fast and, as if her body had a life of it's own, she decided to take a step forward.
It should be its own instead of it's own.

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Thanks! I totally missed that!