You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
Her heart was beating fast and, as if her body had a life of it's own, she decided to take a step forward.It should be its own instead of it's own.
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You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
Her heart was beating fast and, as if her body had a life of it's own, she decided to take a step forward.It should be its own instead of it's own.
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