Boyfriend's Death

in story •  7 years ago 

 

A couple was making out in a car settled in the woods, near a swamp. Afterwards, the boyfriend got out to pee while the girl waits inside.
 

A few minutes have passed, there's still no sign of him so she went outside to look for him. She saw a man lurking in the darkness. She called out her boyfriend's name but there was no answer. The shadow moved towards her. Scared, she rushed to the car and sealed herself in. She heard continuous squeaks brushing outside the car's roof.
 

Determined to drive away, she hits the gas as fiercely as she possibly could and after a few feet away, the car halted. The squeaking is gone now and there's no sign of the man anywhere. She advances on the gas again but it seems something is obstructing the car to move.
 

She quietly managed to go out and check what's causing it. Someone had tied a thick rope from the bumper to a nearby tree. She opened the trunk to find something sharp that would free the car. She found one and started to cut through it. Upon cutting the rope, something heavy fell off the tree causing a loud thud on the ground a feet away from her.
 

A dead body - her boyfriend.
 

She gasped in horror as she calls to her mind the squeaking, screeching sound coming from the car's roof. The scraping sound was her boyfriend's feet. 


 ***My version of the Urban Legend: Boyfriend's Death*** 

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Creepy! But I enjoyed reading it! ❤

Wow, wasn't the ending I thought!!

speechless here

sooo creepy!!