So the help that I got yesterday truly helped. I was like on chapter 2 of my short story and now I'm running on thru to chapter 6 quickly and it looks like it's going to keep going and it's going to be GREAT.....
I might post up the introduction and chapter 1, just so I can get opinions and help and see if i need to take out something or add something to it.
Thanks to all the responded to me. I truly appreciate it.