RE: Chased By The Fire Of Love- Chapter 5

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Chased By The Fire Of Love- Chapter 5

in story •  7 years ago 

An interesting story line that stopped too soon! The conversations were too jumbled together though, a few punctuation here and there would have made it clearer and easier to read. Cheers!

#Bigwaves

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Yea, it's kinda confusing and I'm still learning how to compose the story well. Thank you so much.

Lol, seriously? Well done bruv