Story telling time (Part 1)

Hello once again and welcome to the first chapter of that silly story I said I'll take you through in my first post.

Some things of importance before we begin this little crazy ride,
I would like to give a big thank you to the following users: @reklamavr, @bottymcbotface and @mrechang for being the very first three users that upvoted my introduction post, I took a look at their profiles as well and I safely recommend to check them out (why not really), also I decided to make a thank you post once every three months dedicated to any followers that I have by that time for all their support and last but not least, a huge thank you to Oliver from @two-in-one for introducing me to steemit.

Now back to the matter at hand, the name I decided to give to my story is "The Blanc Millenium", which I could swear I've heard somewhere before, the reason for this name will NOT be revealed in this story however.
When it comes to this story I more or less wrote anything that crossed my mind at the time, so naturally everything you'll read comes from my weird mind, I hope you enjoy, after the chapter ends I will make a further character or location development each day of the week to get you onboard with how I see the characters and their current location, please let me know when you spot a grammatical mistake in the story because I know they're there and I need help correcting them, finally it's good to note that it's written like a script and some protagonists of my favourite childhood fairytales will appear, have fun (also fair warning for a little bad language)

Chapter 1:Taking a break for vacation by force

During the great events of a forgotten millennium, there was a hero whose power, bravery and kindness could be matched by no one, but we’ll not be speaking of him right now, our main character is a more miserable fellow. It all began when human science reached its very peak, by discovering the existence of one hundred more dimensions, parallel to our own. Communication with the other dimensions created a new government in order to command the dimensions and maintain peace between them, that government was named “Multidimensional Essential Security System” or “M.E.S.S.” for short. “M.E.S.S” held peace between all the dimensions successfully for 378 years, then several people started speaking ill of them and after a while they were mysteriously disappearing, leaving no trace leading to the abductors, a few years later people that were just suspect of ill-talk began to disappear as well and so the true face of M.E.S.S. was exposed to public.
They didn’t want just peace, they wanted control over the 100 dimensions, so every now and then a rebellion sprung out of nowhere to take down M.E.S.S. but all were unsuccessful and all the rebel leaders were taken to the highest security prison in all 100 dimensions, I bet you can guess who else ended up there, if you thought the hero from the beginning, no we still won’t talk of him, if your guess was our protagonist then you were correct, he was taken there because there was too much evidence pointing at him as a new rebel leader. Thanks to his entry in the highest security prison, a very important rule had to be broken, this rule was :”all prisoners aren’t allowed an inmate under any circumstances”, and since all prisoners were confirmed masterminds, in their own way at least, a lottery was held to decide who gets the new guy. When our friend woke up he encountered his inmate trying to wake him up with a bucket of water, and so a conversation started

(Jonathan)HEY, wake up already you rookie

(Ethan)fine, fine I’m up, enough with the water, I was hit in the head with a bat you know, it’s not like I wanted to be unconscious

(J)I know, but where’s the fun in waiting? You have a name, rookie?

(Eth)Ethan, Ethan Montmerish

(J)wait, WHAT?!?!? , Montmerish you say, HEY FOLKS THIS FELLA HERE IS A MONTMERISH

(Vaelmina) stop screwing around with us J, it’s not funny anymore, besides, what would a member of the most quiet and harmless family in all of the dimensions do in a place like this, he’s probably a fraud.

(J)is that so, well, you always make a good point Val, but I know how to identify one of them, you, rookie, answer me this, if I were to find the best strawberry pudding in existence where should I go?

(Eth) 43rd dimension, Mason’s sugar trade, ask for Jacob’s 21st cousin

(J)heard that Val, how’s that for a slice of fried cold for you?

(Val)ok, he’s one of them, so what, judging by the thick layer of innocence that surrounds this family, he will need our introductions just so he knows where he’s stuck for a while.

(J) how about you big guy, feeling up for greetings?

(Quimmie)whatever gets us out of here faster J

(J)well, in this case, Mr. Montmerish, in this cell you’re in the honorable presence of Jonathan M. Silvermane, also known as, the very first ruler of dimension 13 the Friend zone kingdom.

(Val)in the cell next to you resides Vaelmina Thestorius, also known as, the first female vampire who had a husband, don’t you ever ask about him

(Q)on the other side of the corridor is a man who’s called Quimmie and that’s all you need to know.

(J)hehahahahahahaha, ah-hahahahaha, Quimmie, oh I’m sorry big guy but that’s still the silliest name I’ve ever heard for a man.

(Q) at least my name isn’t Myriel, dear J

(Eth)wait a minute, you said your name was “Jonathan M. Silvermane”, right?

(J)CRAP, I should have known better than telling my full name to a Montmerish, those people are too cautious for their own good

(Eth)doesn’t look you’re in the spot to mock someone Mr. Silvermane

(J)shut up Ethan, at least we know why you’re possibly in here, you’re way too trust worthy, who knows how much you know

(Eth)well after that blow to the head, not much

(Q)trust me boy, it’s better that way, you get to watch all the fun expressions of the interrogators when they actually realize that you really know nothing that interests them, serves them right, damn bastards.

(Val)that’s nice and all, but I think that your good friend from dimension 66 would like to know that we’re ready to go J, unless you people like the cold marble

(J)right as always Val, alright you innocent pup, the rest in this hole know what to do, but since they have us under surveillance, I can’t be seen explaining something this big to you right now or everything goes to waste, so just keep close to us and try not to do anything stupid, let’s go big guy, bring havoc

(Q)FINALLY

And with that said, Quimmie brought down the door of his cell with a single punch and proceeded to do the same with every other cell, soon after a battalion of guards showed up and stormed the room, not that this was something to worry about, every single one of the guards went unconscious about 15 seconds after going in, and so, the great escape was underway. Their main target was the evidence room, since all their weapons and equipment was there. Shortly after suiting up, they proceeded to just wreck everything in their way, well except for Ethan because all he had in the evidence room besides his clothes was a walking stick. At long last they reached the outer walls where they were greeted by J’s friend as she brought down the wall.

(Alice)although I never leave a friend without help, you really test my friendship Jonathan
(J)and I always make it worth your while dear Alice, you know that

(Alc)indeed, even if I’ll have a lot of work in my hands after this little gig, thanks to your lovely hosts, can’t you be a little less trouble for once, like that young girl I met at the outskirts of your kingdom a while ago

(J)well I can actually, but where’s the fun in that? Can’t I play with my rules anymore?

(Alc) you can, but when you do something goes horribly wrong like….

(Warden) GET BACK HERE YOU REBEL SCUMS

(Alc)like this pain here, Vaelmina, I believe that you owe me one last blessing of darkness if I recall correctly, so if you could dear

(Val)that is true, but you know that all of us can take her together, why go 1on1 with her?

(Alc) well, mainly because your 2 friends here can be easily tricked by her and the third one…. Yeah we’ll blink and he’ll be dead, I mean come on, who the hell uses a walking stick these days?

(Val) good point, just be careful girl

(Alc) oh don’t worry about me now, if I can do good things with my knife, then I can work wonders with my trusty cleaver, just leave her to me and go

As they ran down the rocky cliff side of the prison, they could hear the sounds of steel clanking fading away more and more, all of them looked back at least once, fearing the worst could happen. When they reached their escape spaceship they looked back one last time, they knew that Alice could teleport away at any point, as a dimension ruler she had that kind of power, it was a few moments after the sounds of combat stopped that they realized something terrible, the jail warden that Alice was keeping away were after them and her sword was dyed red with blood, at this point everyone froze with fear, when all of a sudden, Ethan grabbed his walking stick and jumped off the ship and towards the warden, he managed to pull her back down to the prison grounds.

(Wrdn) well well, that’s a gutsy move young man, unfortunately for you, your fate is now sealed in this prison, you have neither a way to defend yourself nor the skill, surrender like a good boy and you’ll be back with your family once again

(Eth) permission to speak freely ma’am? Fuck that

(Wrdn) then perish here young Montmerish

(Eth) not today I think, you took the life of an innocent person, that I cannot forgive

(Wrdn) she went against M.E.S.S., you know the laws, you’ve followed them your entire life, I hope that you won’t make the same mistake

(Eth) quite the contrary, I’m not going against M.E.S.S, I’m going to overthrow them all one by one and you’re in my way

(Wrdn) you dare threaten me traitor, have you forgotten that your dear family is part of them as well? and in extent, you

(Eth) like I said, fuck that

Ethan used his walking stick as a club, but the warden was too vicious for him to stand against, at the same time the faces of fear the others had turned into faces of anger. J had one last blessing of darkness from Val, so he requested she give it to Ethan. With his increased strength, Ethan started to hold his ground against the warden, but it was still not enough, the damage he endured before the blessing was too much for him to keep fighting. Suddenly, just before the warden was about to finish Ethan, a cloud of blue butterflies shielded him and Alice emerged from within the cloud and took the head of the warden right off with a single slash, she then collapsed to the floor due to her injuries and Ethan went to help her

(Alc) well, it appears that I underestimated you, but I need to know, what were you thinking going up against her, you knew you had no chance to defeat her

(Eth) sometimes people do crazy things, I blame J for that one specific, he was a bad influence

(Alc) indeed, but Jonathan is only crazy, not reckless, even if you don’t believe it he thinks before he acts

(Q) aw, aren’t they beautiful?

(J) I couldn’t agree more big guy, come on you lover birds, we’re getting out of here

(Val) shut it you two, go ahead Quimmie bring them in

(Eth) it’s ok for me, I can still walk

(J) oh of course you can you Romeo, hahahaha, Alice and Ethan sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g, OUCH, easy Val I just teased them a bit

(Val) I believe I told you to shut your mouth J, you may be a king but you still lack manners

(Alc) plus, he proved more brave than you Jonathan, so I suggest you learn a thing or two from him about guts

(J) don’t take Val’s side Alice, besides, what could a Montmerish ever teach me? If I want to be a victimized lapdog, then I’ll ask one of them

(Eth) I believe I detect some jealousy J, so drop it, it’s not your style

(Q) yes it is, but only until he doesn’t care anymore

(J) what the hell got into all of you? All I did was joke around a little

(Alc) and that’s why we’re teasing you, it’s our turn, but I have to agree with you on another matter, Ethan, your combat skills suck, we need to fix you on that so here’s the plan, we go into hiding for now, I will cover up our little incident so we can prepare Ethan, Val you’re in charge of his training, Jonathan and Quimmie will help you with whatever you need and when he’s combat ready, we’ll discuss our plan to bring down M.E.S.S.

(J) hey whoa, wait a minute, who said that you decide what goes next?

(Val) I agree with her

(Q) me too

(Eth) I have no other choice as well really

(J) of course you don’t, fine then, but I want you to know that I hate you all for the rest of the day

And so it happened, Ethan started his training with Val, J and Quimmie while Alice returned to her domain in Wonderland in order to patch things up and defend her people. Now I know what you may think, why place a time skip that early in the story? Well, we’re trying to turn a pacifist into a warrior, these things take time you know, so don’t ask questions yet and keep reading forward to chapter 2.

That's how it all started, now I know this post is kind of dull since it has no pictures to help you embrace the story a little bit better, but that's one of my many problems, while I do have an image of the whole thing in my head, I lack any skill that is necessary when it comes to showing you all these things mentioned above, I will try my best to give you a solid description of what i have in mind with some help of images I'll find on the internet.

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