When Morning is the Hardest Part (Original)

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Before the bright,

when evening's grip begins to loosen

like soft concessions in silent darkness

the whispered shadows lie like serpents in wait

that, as one, pounce with the climbing dawn

In her rise light feeds my third eye.



I can see from far away

You have swallowed the sun and filled the sky

Now quiet, you've stilled my fear and love

and sucked the air from this place,

stolen all the words.



Our language is a world without wind or trees

and you are a sentence that sets fire to air

@prufarchy

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      ·  7 years ago 

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      ·  7 years ago 

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Nice poet for the morning

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          ·  7 years ago 

        love to read it.
        thanks for sharing

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            ·  7 years ago (edited)

          It is a poetry full of feelings. I like it a lot.

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