Great story ideea and concept. Just an ideea, I would go for a greater impact at the end, exactly as the punchlines in jokes.
“You! Short guy… Tell me what your version.”
Reply: I was in the fridge!
And this words shoudl tell the whole story. We will all get it & laugh. He doen't need to say anything more.
This is what I love about stories and clips. You can use a lot of elements without really showing or tellig them. The image is there in their mind, you just have to trigger it :)
Yeah there is also and element of interpretation (the actor interpreting the scene) we'll see what works best and go with that. :)
Definitely agree with the premise. Last line goes boom!
Thank you for the insight!
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I like his idea...but short guy needs to be in his underwear, then hit it with "I was in the fridge!" LOL
Love the whole thing, can't wait to see it!
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Haha yeah of course in underwear. I forgot to say that when describing the scene.
Thank you so much fir the input @dreemit
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Ya' welcome ;)
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Brilliant somebody!!! 😄
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