Genesis [Original Short Story]

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The scientist stood and gazed upon his creation. If only he had more time. He created the biosphere in just a week, rushing to complete it against all odds. First he set up the lighting needed, then the land and water, the plant life and eventually the animals. Animals that were, for the most part, a bizarre form of self expression for the geneticists on his team.

And bizarre it was, but that was not what bothered the scientist as he stood on the platform above the biosphere, observing from above. His thoughts were with the creature sleeping in the next room - the highest of his achievements - the artificial lifeform capable of self-awareness and holding in it endless potential. Adam was the result of many years of research and experimentation, so it was no wonder the scientist chose to give Adam some of his own external features. He was like a son to him, a newborn with a world to discover.

The scientist smiled to himself and glanced at the display before him. According to the readings, his little boy was dreaming. What could he possibly be dreaming of?

"Sir?" the assistant's voice interrupted the scientist's thoughts. "We're ready," he said.

"Were the predators sedated?" the scientist checked.

"Of course."

"Then proceed as planned. I will observe from here," the scientist said and the assistant hurried away.

The scientist leaned forward to get a better look into the biosphere, to observe as his miraculous creation materialized on the green glass.

Adam was nude, hairy and generally more animal than person by design. His esthetics hardly mattered as his genetic makeup held the potential for physical mutation.

He woke, opening his eyes only to be blinded by the bright sun-like lamp illuminating the biosphere. He looked for a place to hide, like a beast would, but the curiosity embedded into his genetic code force him to want to know. Adam rose to his feet, carefully exploring his surroundings with the curiosity of a child.

The scientist smiled watching his little boy make his first steps in his little world. He finished his daily report and left the observation platform.

It wasn't long before trouble started. The research executives gathered the scientists working on the Adam project and displayed the rather obvious challenge: Adam's reproductive urges. Like all other needs, these too demanded to be filled. In just a few short years, Adam understood his desires and needs, and observed the animals around him mate and reproduce. So it was really no wonder that he reached the selfish conclusion: "I want this too".

"I foresaw this," the scientist said with some arrogance in his tone. "Which is why I've already created a female," he added, and the other experts seemed to accept this spontaneous decision on his behalf. All except one.

The researcher was a prominent figure in the scientific community on his world. A specialist in the evolution and genetics of his own reptile species, it was he who proposed the Adam project in an attempt to get a better understanding of the genetics and evolution of mammalian species in the galaxy. But the scientist had to take over. His kind always do. The researcher hated and resented him for it, turning some of his frustrations into venomous reptiles to add to the biosphere. But he still desired revenge, and the female was his perfect oportunity to execute it.

The male and female adjusted quickly to one another, perhaps because of their shared genetics. They would gather food together, share it, and spend time enjoying one another's company in fascinating ways like making up names for plants and animals. Adam learned to laugh and the research executives began to feel it was time to move forward with the project.

The scientist's goal was always to create an independent sentient mammal species and populate a compatible planet with these creatures so their development could be observed. The goal was always clear to the scientist, but having spent years observing Adam in his habitat, he's grown close to the little fellow who wasn't even aware of his presence or role in his creation. All the scientist wanted now was to keep Adam around a bit longer, rather than dump him on some rock and hope he survives.

So the scientist altered records, faked tests and did all he could to postpone the inevitable - the next step of evolution for his little pets. The research executives ordered it. The evolutional stimulants were hidden in the fruit of a tree that was transported into the biosphere while Adam and his female, now nicknamed Eve slept. As soon as they would consume the fruit, their genetic makeup would mutate at an accelerated pace, giving them a significant boost in intelligence, allowing them to develop complex language, learning and tool-making skills.

The scientist had his mind set on postponing that for as long as he could. He waited patiently until the observation deck was empty and all other scientists and researchers were done for the day. He activated the telepathic transmitter and aimed it at Adam.

"Listen to me," he thought at him. "I created you, and I..." He hesitated. "I am GOD and I order you not to eat from the fruit free by the lake. If you eat from it, Adam, you will die."

Adam looked frightened and hesitant. The scientist smiled. Fear was what he was going for.

*

The biosphere was quiet at the time of night the reptilian researcher chose to execute his plan. He sneaked into the biosphere, with the telepathic transmitter in hand. He was looking for Eve, and found her curled under a tree.

"Wake up," he thought in her direction.

Her eyes opened and she was about to scream at the sight of the alien before her when he tried to soothe her.

"Shhhh," he hissed, much like a snake. Eve stared at him, her lips shaking. "I have an offer for you," he thought at her. "The fruit of the tree near the lake is not poison. The man who spoke to Adam lied. If you eat it, you will be stronger and wiser than him."

Eve smiled at the reptile and nodded. That was enough. He would not have to kill her, and by morning, their IQ will have doubled, and they'll be gone, making room for a new project. HIS project.


It all happened just as he had predicted. Eve fed Adam the fruits from the tree, and by noon that day, the two were wearing makeshift clothes, hunting and cooking animals, and speaking in sentences with more than two or three words.

The scientist was furious. His anger boiled in him, but he kept it in check, saving it for later and for the reptilian research who seemed to have forgotten about the backup security cameras in the biosphere. By the evening, the scientist's creations were fully dressed, sitting in the lab and hearing their creation story from the scientist. Or a simplified version of it, anyway.

He told them that since they've eaten from the fruit, he would have to banish them from paradise, the biosphere he created for them. He tried to teach them a bit about the world they were about to inhabit, but they could sense his sadness and frustration through the care and fatherly love.

"But why?" Adam asked. The typical question of a child who did not understand that he was little more than a lab rat.

"What else would you ask?" the scientist inquired. "To have eternal life, or perhaps to be a God like me?"

Adam did not have an answer to that question.

Yet.

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Notes: I've always had a special relationship with religion - I've used to fuel my writing, but that's about it. I wrote this story in 2001 in Hebrew (right around my finals in mandatory bible studies), and totally forgot about it. Today, I remembered it and decided to find it and translate it for my readers on steemit (that's you!). 

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@techslut : I love this. Great writing and an even more brilliance in the way you have imagined and connected them. This is the kind of stories that I'd like to be writing.

I had so many things coming up while going reading this post and I was so irritated having to move away from this and rushed back to gobble this up.

Awesome Stuff!!

Thank you! <3

If I did not know that there is a book called the Bible, and I was only exposed to your creation story, there is no doubt that it sounds more logical and true

It takes courage to publish a post like this, well done (I'm not a believer).
I'm always looking for what's missing in every story, but this story is just perfect.
The problem I have now is to read the post a few more times,
Break down every word and rethink a lot of things.
Thank you very much for that.

I really liked your way of thinking.

This is so good?? Like, "I wish I had imagined this myself" good! I've always had a soft spot for stories that imply humanity was in fact created although by aliens and not a God. Bonus points if the aliens see themselves as the gods.

Thank you! It's a shame I am leaving steemit today. I've become the target of an attack by some douche with a bot army who is downvoting all my content. It's complicated, but I am done here. There's no room for content on this platform while some of the whales are doing EVERYTHING they can to drive us out.

I love your content, and hope you will join me in boycotting steemit until he is stopped. I will publish a post about it later tonight. It kinda stung just now, seeing your comment after having this story downvoted to hell by that ass.

I'm so sorry :/

I know exactly what you're talking about but I'm afraid there isn't much users like me and you can do about it.

I'll message you on discord, maybe we can chat privately.

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AND ALL YOUR EARNINGS ARE FROM BOTNETS

You are destroying the platform and calling other people names. You are hypocrisy incarnate in the form of a little boy with a tiny tiny member.

Your parents did a really bad job teaching you how to be a human being, didn't they? They didn't hug you much, I am going to guess. Poor little boy. Why don't you use some of that money you made scamming steemit users and pay for some therapy? It'll do you good. Really.

And I do feel bad for your parents. What an embarrassment you must be to them!

I can't see personal attacks help on personal attacks.

Awe, why so butthurt?

We're about to have some real fun.

Bernie, would you downvote her if she wouldn't use voting services?

I can't see the amount of contribution being determined if someone is upvoting their posts or not? I've found bought upvotes unrewarding on a personal level and on a long run, I can see the harm they are doing on the service.

However I'm worried if some will see your acts on paid upvotes as personal attacks on the users themselves.

I can see this can be seen as more offensive than it would need to be.

Very good. I have something similar, a little longer and perhaps a tad darker but born of the same origins. I'll need to dig it out now. I think I'm going to like this site :)

I hope so! Welcome to the party!

I found it. It's nearly 4,000 words and extrapolates the results of technical interference with a burgeoning race. I'm sorry to ask questions of you but is it worth posting such a piece when I have, as yet, almost no followers, or should I wait until I have managed to accumulate hundreds or thousands or tens of thousands?
Should I post any stories at this time?
Thank you in advance for any answers. I'm out of my depth.

In my experience? Start with an introduction. Then a few short stories. About one a day if you can keep up. Once you have SOME content up, start engaging people by replying to posts - like you did here. That's how you get followers. The next step is experimenting with promotion strategies and bots, and getting on the discord to chat with fellow authors.

Thank you for your time m'lady :)
Let the games begin...

Happy to assist, dear sir. You can find me on various steemit discord channels under the same nickname. Holler if you need advice or assistance.

@johnkingwriter : Waiting for you to post that story & following you! Maybe you could break it down into many parts/posts.

I love it. Sounds a lot like the annunaki story

Annunaki story? What's that?

The story of the Anunnaki tells us that we humans were created by the Anunnaki along with other races from the galaxy. A big player in that creation were the Reptilian Race. Long story short we were created to mine gold from our planet which They used in there cities. The story goes much deeper than. I will do a story on it and will let you know when its done. You can also youtube "anunnaki" and spend hours soaking up info

Huh. Interesting stuff!!! And tag me when you do write it up!

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Okay, so I am going to sit here and watch EVERYTHING about this ship. OMG. I thought I made this up!!!

"Anakim" in Hebrew is giants.
"Ananim" in Hebrew is clouds.

Thank you SO MUCH for drawing my attention to this. I am beyond fascinated.

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That sounds very interesting @ibata11

Great Story!!! Perfect for my Saturday morning!
upvoted, following

Thank you! <3

Great writeup @techslut , sounds like something from the bible.

Wonder why... :P

Are you a church goer at all? :d

Nope. But bible studies are mandatory in Israeli schools. And my mom did drag me to temple when I was little. I did not like it.

Awwwn, so sorry, do you mind if i tell you little about the bible? Hope your mom wont find me hehehehehe :d

Well, I have several copies of it and read it cover to cover more than once. Overall? Meh. Maybe 20% upvote. Too much violence. :)

Lol... Anyway, do you beleive God exist ??

I have more belief in extraterrestrial intelligence than I do in an all knowing all seeing creator. But I am open to the oportunity I am wrong, just don't see why it has any influence on how I live my life. Maybe there's a God, maybe there isn't - doesn't affect my rent or bills.

nice one

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The scientists as God. What a novel concept.

Hey you also post on technology and science. So do I. You can check my post too. And follow back please. I'd appreciate that a lot.

The story of Adam and Eve but set in the futuristic time amazing. I loved it.

Good

nice

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Hi @techslut
Very good post , i like it
Thank for sharing

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Thats a great story @techslut

great writing.. enjoyed!

Cool Concept! @techslut

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