Tall Andy

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Tall Andy
A Deep Romance
by The Invisible Man

Tall Andy


Amanda Faulk is a tall, handsome and white navigator from mall. His life is going nowhere until he meets Andy Cornholder, a hot, dark man with a passion for sex.

Amanda takes an instant disliking to Andy and the mean and demon ways he learnt during his years in church.

However, when a monster tries to attack Amanda, Andy springs to the rescue. Amanda begins to notices that Andy is actually rather horny at heart.

But, the pressures of Andy's job as a painter leave him blind to Amanda's affections and Amanda takes up blowjob to try an distract himself.

Finally, when greedy singer, Ana Linjector, threatens to come between them, Andy has to act fast. But will they ever find the deep love that they deserve?





Thanks for reading,
The Invisible Man
@theinvisibleman

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The story plunges you deep into the action....I can imagine the story going along..the characters, namely and Andy moving from distrust to friendship, and from friendship to love....


Its a good story, but you might want to consider your punctuation and grammer. The character pronouns seem mixed up, and make it difficult understanding and follow the story, especially for those who are not very good at reading.

His (Her) life is going nowhere until he (she) meets Andy Cornholder, a hot, dark man with a passion for sex.

Amanda takes an instant disliking to (of/for) Andy and the mean and demon ways he learnt during his years in church.

......blowjob to try an (and) distract himself (herself), i think because Amanda is a female!

Thank you...

yes, sometime i get mix up

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