and since writers attach their souls to their work, they become bitter and suck off liquor till their biles rapture leaving their liver ruined and their very lives washed away by their own fears!

Go You!!!!!! :-) :-) :-)

this is a great piece there bro, and as advised, let me tell you this;

"I will try to criticize with caution but I am not the world so please be ready”

Bring it on Bro!